After finding out that her parents lied to her Twilight runs away from home and ends up at Celestia's door. Meanwhile, a lonely Celestia is longing for family.
Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus
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Real touching oneshot. At first I was worried about the conflict, but it was nice to see how it was more of a front to other worries and just seeing everyone's interaction was nice. Glad I wasn't drinking anything when Celestia almost called Twilight a brat, caught me off guard. The ideas for Celestia's family history sounded very interesting and I wouldn't mind seeing something that expanded on that.
Over all, very enjoyable read
Cool, heart touching little story.
Aww.... that last bit, loved it.
I have to admit I laughed when the (initial) source of conflict came to light; I was expecting something grimmer I guess. I suppose I was relieved.
Was especially touching to have Twi's family treat Celestia as one of their own.
I love how soft the descriptions of Celestia's thoughts are, its not beating people over the head and there's enough there to understand.
6412063 Even if they're normally polite and no matter how much you love them... kids can shitty little snots sometimes, even the sweet ones.
hokld the fuckin phone
was celestia going to call twilight a brat i cant think of another word that fits there starting with br
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Well, same can be said for adults
Great story! Though I do wish to point out one small thing that really had no consequence to anyone that does not know a lot about horses.
Tomatoes are poisonous to horses. Sorry if I sound condescending or anything. I really don't mean to.
6936190 I have a very long and boring headcanon that Equestrian horses are genetically different from our horses. Thanks for the review.
Daw... filly Twilitght is so cute
a mlp fanfic reader named enharmonic have uploaded This fanfic now to youtube
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xybWakWvVU
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Thanks for letting me know. That's great.
https://youtu.be/5xybWakWvVU
And so, Twilight learned the most important lesson of all: Santa is real, he's just dead. XD
I love everything about this. :D