I still don’t get used to hear you in my mind

Would ‘‘can't’’ not make more sense in this context?

I don’t want you to take risks and hurt yourself, if something happens and

The comma seems like it should be a period.

all of them where beasts

were

Well, I could see it if you stopped moving me like a sack of potatoes.”

Opening quotation mark is missing.

His surprise was mayor when he noticed

major?

many persons made a fortune;

people

you can’t blame for trying.”

‘‘blame me for trying’’

Jack looked at the fool moon in the sky

full

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Hi Hein, thanks for pointing out all those errors, I fixed them already.

Rinik kul nuz zu'u prodah...more.

Not a bad story to bad it will never be finished

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Certainly it seems you´re right. However, and not saying when, I may return just to try and finish it... boy, saying that after so long kind of made me smile.

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Glade i could make you smile then!!!