Interesting.

6008642 (nods head) This has an interesting start. Shall we see where this goes?

6008788 Yes please.

More!!!

Wow. I only hope they won't appear somewhere in 'murica, that has been done way too often.
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6012884
Oh boy

btw I found a little error here:

Just as he finished of saying that, Jack groaned in pain, Luna had hit him with a stone."

6010167 You could always write your own story where the go to a different country instead of bitching about it being set in the States? How 'bout doing that?

Nice, it is interessting, but i am not sure how much i really like it, i have to read more.

Several minutes went by until finally she saw emerge from the fog a creature, it was tall and thin, but wasn’t a pony of any kind. From the distance, one could say it was a minotaur, but it didn’t have horns nor fur, still, this strange creature walked upright on two legs, and his skin was covered with fabrics./quote]

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*The title*

6956665
Oh yes

Fog: "common, In and out 20minute adventure!"