A guy who likes to read MLP stories. A lot of stories.
A sniper team is sent on a mission to assassinate a high value target. The whole mission was a setup, a trap, the one chance to end it all, gone. This gives our heroes a second chance in Equestria! How will the ponies react? Will the two keep their sanity?
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Its nice so far can`t wait for more.
7171332 Thank you! Writing quality will increase with chapter 7
This first chapter is pretty bad. Besides the spelling errors like "new" and "stopeed", the date should have been sometime in 2008 because in 2047, there would have been newer and better weapons, vehicles, and terrorist group name. For instance, why the hell would the army use the M4A1 for 40+ years? Also a chinook should not still be in service after all this time.
7171947 Believe me man, I wrote what is out now almost four years ago. I'll go through and change the date to a much more reasonable period to make the guns/vehicles more believable. Next chapter will show massive improvements from my uneducated self from the past.
Awesome chapters. You are doing a amazing job, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please continue! I love this story!
I'm rather enjoying this.
7208056 Same here! Can't wait for more from you Teal Blast!
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Thanks guys, means a lot to me. Unfortunately, I don't write on the weekends, i write during the week, and try to do it every day monday through friday, at about an hour each day with my bus ride from high school. Within that time i usually write about 500 words in each sitting, so ill try to get the next chapter to be ~2.5k words, maybe a small bit less.
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I feel like this is a reference to another fanfic, one that I wish would update for the first time in over a year....
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It is. I was friends with him a while ago, but he lost interest in MLP sadly. I lost interest too for a year but came back after reading the first fic I've read.
Like the story So far!
This chapter is much better! Please continue!
I like this story too . It's good
Dis dead?