A soldier, Tom "Blaze" Jacobs, from a special squad from the USA, found himself in Equestria, where he tries to adapt to the Equestrian life, and protect his new friends.
Tom is a boy whose originally dutch, but after a plane crash, he came into a special US army training camp, where childeren are trained from their age of 10, to become masters of the battlefield. When he is on a mission, he ends up in Equestria, where he tries to get new friends, and adapt to the life there.
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Interesting oh and uh "power generator"
Ooooohh man, there's so much stuff that's incorrect here...
Hmmm... Seen the premise of "Super Soldier in Equestria" before, but this looks fresh enough to warrant a look.
Also, I see your new here. On behalf of the NCR, welcome to fimfiction.
Adapt.
ADAPT.
And the idea that the US, currently or in any near future, would train 10 year olds as soldiers, is beyond ridiculous. Even a whiff of it happening would be utter ruin for anyone and everyone involved, and far too risky for any professional politician to even begin to sign off on.
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Yes, yes, I know it is ridiculous, but it's a story, and stories go as far as you can imagine, and about the spelling, my main language is not English, it's Dutch, so please don't mind every mistake I make. I hope you understand.
Not bad! Me gusta. :)
Haben Sie Deutsch sprechen?
Bisher Ich mag deine Geschichte. Aber die Rechtschreibung verbessern könnte. Es fühlt sich auch wiederholenden, wie es ein Run auf. Andere als die, haben Sie eine ausgezeichnete Arbeit!
Well, I see the potential in this story, i mean, the chapters a little in hurry but I enjoyed them. Keep up the good work buddy.
God damnit, I finished reading it
More please?
Hello everybody,
I'm sorry that I haven't posted for a while, but I just didn't find the power for it.
But, I'm back now, writing on the story again, and I'm currently bussy on chapter 2, so yea...
I also want to ask you guys something: Do you want long chapters, that take long to make (say like 12.000 words) or more smaller chapters (something like 2.000-5.000 words) which will be posted quicker?
Cya all later
Hmm.. A little rushed I feel in some spots, but overall, good chapter.
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