Unexpected Emotions

by MidnightBlaze16

Chpater 5 - The End

Rainbow was lying on her bed, banging her head against the pillow. "Stupid, stupid, stupid! Why the hay did I do that? I should've known it would go wrong!"

'Yep, you should've'

"Leave me alone!" Rainbow yelled, throwing a pillow across the room and hitting Tank, who had been standing there watching his best friend freak out with wide eyes.

Rainbow rolled onto her back and stared at the roof wistfully. "I'm such an idiot..." she said, letting the tears flow. She was surprised by a knock on the door.

"C-Coming," she said, standing up and wiping her eyes. She opened the door to see the pony she wanted to see both the most and the least right now. "O-Oh, hi Twilight. Uh, what's up?"

Twilight looked really worried. "Rainbow, have you been crying?"

"N-no...maybe."

"Rainbow..."

"I's fine Twilight. If you don't feel the same way, it's fine. I didn't expect it to go well anyway," Rainbow said turning away only to feel a magical aura grab her tail.

"Rainbow...I'm not sure how I feel about all this, but, I think...I think I might feel the same way. Either way, I'm willing to give it a try!" Twilight said, a soft smile on her face.

Rainbow smiled, eyes lighting up again as she tackled Twilight to the ground i a hug. "Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!" she said, wrapping her hooves around Twilight's neck.

"It's fine Rainbow, really. Um, as much as I like hugs, can you maybe get off me?" Twilight asked, blushing.

"Oh, right sorry," she said sheepishly, getting up and Twilight stood up.

"So, uh - mph!" Rainbow's train of thought was interrupted when her head was pulled towards Twilight's and a soft pair of lips met her own. Rainbow's eyes widened but slowly closed as she sunk into the kiss. Her tongue met Twilight's lips, asking for permission. Twilight granted it and their tongues wrestled passionately. They pulled away, a thin line of drool connecting their lips as they panted. Rainbow smiled, blushing, and Twilight smiled
back.

'Good for you'

'Oh, shut up.'

"Love ya Twi,"

"I love you, too, Rainbow.

Author's Note:

Ad I think that's it! I might do an epilogue though, and I will definitely be making a sequel one day. I want to improve my writing a bit fist though.

Comments

[dream1990]

i like it and MidnightBlaze16 please make a epilogue for this story

[RavenWolfmoon15]

And this is what I find strangely beautiful but strange :3

[ModMCdl]

"The End"

and yet the story is still marked as incomplete...

Ah'm confuzzled...

[MidnightBlaze16]

5966861 I'm not sure if to make an epilogue or not.

[ModMCdl]

5968259 Ohhhh... totally should....

(After all... every TwiDash fic needs to be longer )

[Icean]

"Not much of a plot" you said? That was an understatement. If you find a better conflict, you could actually be a good author. You do have some potential, after all. It's kinda obvious, really....

[Icean]

But a sequel sounds like a good idea! It'll help, I'm sure.

[Daring Cammie Do]

I hear you're looking for an editor? I love reading and I happen to find grammar mistakes easily, even ones that no one notices for an entire day but me! If you're interested, just message me if you can via Fimfiction. If not, contact me on Wattpad. My name is Cloud261 there. I could also help you with writing if you want.

[ModMCdl]

6026680 My name is ModMCdl on Wattpad :P

totally not taking advantage of my #1 fan here...

[Daring Cammie Do]

6519826 That was, like, so freaking long ago

[ModMCdl]

6523561 Idc, I'm taking advantage of you.

[Daring Cammie Do]

6523637 um, how?

[zeroichigo]

i hate this because it is not complete.