TStruggling with Emotions
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
Rainbow and Twilight have both had crushes on each other for a while. When Twilight accidentally breaks Rainbow's heart, Rainbow runs straight into the Everfree forest, endangering both her and her precious crush
Gore
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Pinkie
Rarity
Spike
FoxyAndPip · 7.7k words · 39 4 · 2.4k views
EHeartbreak
Equestria Girls
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
"Looks like somepony has a crush on the new guy!" "WHAT! No, no I don't!" "Oh, she does! She totally does!" You heard them. Twilight has a crush on somepony else. You'll never have a chance with her. Just give it up, Dash.
Second Person
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Spike
Main 6
FoxyAndPip · 1.2k words · 37 5 · 3.1k views
TI am Machine
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
After an...accident causes Rainbow Dash to lose most of her body, it being replaced with robotic parts and artificial intelligence, Rainbow and her friends must get used to her new life.
Gore
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Spike
Main 6
FoxyAndPip · 3k words · 29 10 · 1.3k views
TAnimals
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
Freddy Fazbear and his friends are transported to Equestria, and transformed into ponies.
Crossover
Other
Main 6
FoxyAndPip · 8.7k words · 17 2 · 894 views

Nov

6th

2015

Editor? · 10:11am Nov 6th, 2015

So I'm trying to write more stuff but I noticed it could be better. I've needed an editor for a while anyway.

Just someone who can detect grammar is spelling mistakes easily and correct them for me, rewrite parts that feel kind of dodgy or don't flow, help with the show-don't-tell aspect of things etc.

I mean I'm a 6th grade student from Trottingham and my partner is a pirate-fox robot built in like the 1970s, we're not the best when it comes to grammar and all that.

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