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FoxyAndPip
Ahoy! This be Foxy the Pirate! I be here with me matey Pip to write tales about ponies. Come on, even mighty pirates can like ponies!
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Normally, I don't read FNAF stories. But, I decided to give this story a chance. I see some errors within this story. I'll point a couple out for you.
I think you meant to say building.
Switching up your and you're is common. Double-check your chapters before publishing just in case of this error.
Again, switching up words is common. It should have been they're.
A bit of a typo here. Also, there should be a period at the end rather than a comma.
Remember. Read through your chapters before publishing. Take your time. I'll check for future errors if needed.
6290603 Man, I suck at checking stuff like that. Thanks for the help! Feel free to edit other chapters in a similar way if you want
Typo? Kinda noticeable.
I think there were others but I didn't see them stand out as much. (Either that or I skipped them accidentally)
Nice joke there with the chicken coop and Chica.
Typos are common.
There should be a period here. Unless you did that intentionally?
It should be a Z instead of a S.
Okay, were you rushing? It seems like you did.
6293600 Yeah we were rushing a bit. Can't find where the 'over' bit was though. Where was it?
6293574 Foxy sad
fixed
I can't wait for the next chapter Matey ;)
Thanks uh - wait WHAT???
Anyway thanks for the review, life has been busy lately but we're working on it!
Pip: Foxy what is it?
Foxy: HELP I'VE BEEN CLONED!!! MAN THE HATCHES!!!
Pip:
FoxyXTwi
6476279 Not exactly...maybe next story XD
6476458
6476458 senpi thanks for new chapter
firsy for my senpi
AHHH RUN ITS A MUMMY! (that is my joke of the day)
6294735 I CANT SEE THE RAIMBOW LAUGH!
6422709 MAN THE MUTANT CANNONS!
6476458 why have foxyXtwi im just getting bored of Xs
6492480 .... QUICK TURN OFF YANDARE SIM.! QUICK BEFORE SHE NOTICES
6294735 You mean
(Remove space from rainbow laugh, it should be rainbowlaugh.) Also, like this story.