An uncomfortable incident threatens the peace and relaxation of Applejack and Rarity's spa day!
I suppose there is mild suggestion here. Nothing cloppy, though.
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@rawrmilly...
I suggest adding a bit more, of Applejack quietly, and deeply gratefully, thanking the spa pony sisters for having had Applejack's back (or nethers, in this case) in avoiding embarrassment before Rarity.
Well, I have to say that I have never read a rarijack story before. But I like it. It made me laugh out couple of times.
But a question... liquid between aj's legs... Euh... That... You would think that if aj daydreams more, that she would now that this would happen, so she could prevent it...
Anyway. Are you gonna write a sequel to this?
Don't really need the "so" in there.
"Explicate" is more about analysing or developing an idea, but from the context of the sentence, it seems more like Applejack is having trouble explaining the scenarios to herself.
And I agree with 4818255: Applejack should thank the spa ponies for saving her flank.
But it was a cute story, and nicely told. Good job!
This story was cool. I liked it. Keep up the good work
4818309 i added in a lil paragraph at the end. :3 after i published it, i thought about how i didn't include that. it was late! my syntax is kind of amateurish at times, i suppose. maybe i need to work on my voice. but i think i did want to use explicate. thank you for all your help and attention!
4818259 yeah. it happens, i guess. x3 uhm...i wasn't planning on it. i like doing one-shots, and i'm not actually a fan of this kind of story. it kinda just came out...
4820684 I know how that feels. It happens to me too, once. But I'm not gonna put a link... it's kinda. .. more mature... And fuged up...
That's what aj could say...
huh