You find yourself in Equestria. In this new land you get to meet everysingle one of your favorite characters from the show and find a good relationship between you and Fluttershy. In this story, I give the reader a chance to put himself (as this is based around the reader's gender being male) as the protagonist.
a.....nice try i guess, i am honest, if i say it is good what you have written in a way, but it is to short to be something special for me.
I guess the only weird thing for me was, that he wanted to ask her on a date, but i didn´t even read that he was interessted.
5890039 I understand your point, I just left it there, because if my own personal views. Most fanfictions don't give you, as the reader a chance to make your own ending. I'm letting anyone that wants to read this choose what to do from here. It's a fluttershy simulator you're the main character. You choose.
5892068 hhhhmmmm alright, i guess i give in, since i kind of liked it you get an upvote from me.
5893150 Okay, thanks. I guess I should have put in an author's note that that was how it was supposed to go.