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The Derpy Doctor


"There has to be evil so that good can prove its purity above it." — Gautama Buddha

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Twilight finds happiness in a world alien and hurtful. In the arms of a stranger, she discovers friendship in a new light. After experiencing the worse part of our world, Twilight experinces an even better side to friendship. The side that she never knew about humans shows, and the light of heart outweighs the blackness of other's souls. This story starts out depressing, mind you, but it becomes very bright in a short amount of time. Please read past the first chapter before rating this.
Anyone unwilling to read any more than the first chapter before disliking will be asked to not read it at all.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 13 )

nice that is a good story

5628596 Thanks. I needed that.

okay. Readers. I know that this story is quite depressing. I would dislike it if I were you, too. However, I have worked hard to make the middle and ending of the book to be a beautiful piece. If you give it a chance, I'm sure you'll find that you like it.

I told them Portals would prove itself to them. If they don't make it this far in the story that's their own fault.

BEAUTIFUL!!!

5732854 Thank you so much! If you are interested, I am just abou to apply the sequel to this story. As so, i will add your name to my list of thank you's in the acknowledgements section.

5734054 I will as soon as it is approved by a proctor.

5734054 Also, if you thought that was beautiful, I wrote a blog post labeled portals. If you read the most recent post, I tried to make that one particularly so.:raritywink:

5734625 Okay, it appears that none of the approvors is working on passing the sequel right now. So, I'll just give you the link now so that some time tomorrow when it gets approved for moderation, you can have the link. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/253488/portals-paradox
So, There you go. You are in the acknowledgements section.
Thank you for your support.

Read past this chapter, it ends happily.
I do not welcome you if only read this first section.
Do not read this book if you are on willing to read past this chapter.

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