The adventures of the shapeshifting doctor who aspires to cure any disease!
Due to a little accident caused by the chaos aboard the Thousand Sunny, Chopper finds himself in the magical land of Equestria, but is soon enough finding new friends in our pony-pals. Will the ponies accept him for what he is? And will Chopper find a way back to his crew?
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Okay, so this is my first story, so please don't be too harsh with me okay?
anyways, i have been reading mauvsheep's story: its AWESOME!!!
dear mauvsheep, if you read this, please dont get me wrong! i absolutely love your story, so i just wanted to make one on my own! also im free for any oneshot bonus storys for this crossover as well as improvment suggestions and other elements for the story plot (i try to bring them in as good as i can but i still have my own ideas for the next chapter) i hope youre gonna like this story and have fun reading!
this should be interesting, can't wait to see what you do with it.
loving it so far, i have noticed a lot of spelling and grammar errors though but they can easily be fixed
After giving Brook one of her infamous beat-up's, followed by another cheer about how strong and yet lovley she is from the ship's cock Sanji, Nami, the navigator, looked at her Log-Pose, looking for the new course.
why is sanji a cock?
What's with all the OP crossovers being added all of a sudden?
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Still not as numerous as all the Transformers, Pokemon, Star Trek, and Dr. Who crossovers this site has
Do yourself a favor. Get rid of those pictures in your chapter. Most people see that as a cop-out as being lazy. It's an easy way for your story to be downvoted automatically.
Never link any pics, music, or video. They're very distracting, pointless, and overall will deter people from your fic.
2356227Yeah, but there were like 10 OP fics added to nime crossovers within a span of like a minute. As for links, it's just him who shouldn't do it. Some people can pull it off very well.
2351669 oh NOOOOOOOOOOOO FUDGE STUPID TYPO XD i hoped it wouldnt happen! Thx so much for mentioning ill fix that as soon as i can
lol sanji the cock...
2356985 sorry for that :/ i just did these so people who are unfamiliar with OP would get a picture of what OP elements (like choppers forms for example) would look like. then again youre may be right... so im thinking about your words. its just depending on how the viewers would like it. so to all you other guys n' gals, thx for viewing and giving me help^^
2354043 im sorry i just couldnt resist
i do belive OPxMLP suddenly gets a neverexperienced boom in fiction stuff lol
2351271 alright, thanks xD im on it!
ATTENTION!! For all who don't like crossover-shipping, this story contains RarityXSpike and ChopperXFluttershy (or as some like to call it: Choppershy^^) so please don't hate me for doing this (what the funk am i talking about? i already mentioned romance by tagging it with "Romance"!)
Chopper x Fluttershy
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Please, sir or madame, get an editor.
I don't hate your story, I just hate the bad grammar.
Grammar Nazi. Right here. <---
And trust me, you're not the only one to notice those similarities. Hell, Pinkie and Luffy are like the same in their respective universes. They can both defy laws of gravity/physics. They eat shitloads and say they're still hungry. And you do NOT want to make them angry. Anyways, I would agree to the monster chopper vs. greed-rage Spike. I'm assuming this is early in the Season 2 timeline. But I don't think The Stare would work on monster chopper. You see, for the stare to work, it has to delve into the mind of the person being stared at. When Chopper goes monster mode, he loses his mind, thereby cancelling out anything The Stare could do to him. And I would recommend bringing in the rest of the Strawhat gang before the end of Season 2.
I would include my ideas here, but if you were to take my advice, then it would leave massive spoilers to everyone else. I'll PM them to you.
2390904 But can't chopper control his monster point and also his will power is too strong because the stare and haki are almost the same thing
oh and the next part corresponds with the questions you asked
1. King Sombra good opportunity, Grown up Spike vs. Chopper agreed
2. Make it out of the blue
3. None
2397660Well here's the thing. I've only watched up to just past where Franky joined the Strawhats. I'm still behind on One Piece history.
2397664 Well, the truth is, he really CAN control it after the two-year timeskip. But i'll make him go on beserk mode anyways :D. We still don't know what happens when he eats two rumbleballs after the 2 years ;)
2401797???
Where I watched, he could still semi-control 2 rumble balls. His powers just fluctuated into different forms when he tried to switch. It was after the third rumble ball that he went into monster mode.
2390904 oh, okay then. though i would love to make Fluttershy use the stare on him. i got inspired to do that by irie-mangastudios. :http://irie-mangastudios.deviantart.com/art/Nakama-is-Magic-FluttershyxChopper-Monster-330358283 i think that would make a rather touching moment :D
2401998Okay then. And also, might I ask without you revealing any spoilers... when does Luffy leave for 2 years to go training? I feel like I'm getting close, but idk.
2397664Woops said too much sorry!
2402135Eh, it's fine. I've already seen a few things from the 2 years later One Piece. Him being able to control Monster Chopper isn't all that surprising.
2402032 lol sry but this story plays already AFTER the 2 year timeskip xD! But i'm still bringing in some pre timeskip-stuff (attacks, or choppers forms for example)
2401914 yeah and so, in my story, his devil fruit powers work in a SIMILAR way:
-Before timeskip:
-1 Rumble Ball:
3 minutes with 4 additional forms.
-2 Rumble Balls in 6 hours:
3 minutes with 4 additional forms without control.
-3 Rumble Balls in 6 hours:
Monster Point without time-limit but out of control
After timeskip:
-1 Rumble Ball:
3 minutes in a controllable Monster Point.
-2 Rumble Balls in 6 hours:
3 minutes in Monster Point, again.
-3 Rumble Balls in 6 hours:
?????????????????????????
2411013Ah, okay then.
2401914 oh oops i now realized i meant "we don't know what happens when he eats 3 rumbleballs after the 2 years", not 2 rumbleballs. sry, my bad
DUN dun DUN and clifhangered with far to few updates for what this could be
I know, I know. I know what you all want to say righ now: "WHERE THE PONY HELL HAVE YOU BEEN!?" Well, im not going to talk myself out of this, just my good old friend that i like to call writers block. And even though im new in the author-business, i already can tell you: Writers block sucks!
Also have you heard of mauvsheep and his/her story? Pretty sad, i know.
i hope he/she soon will make a comeback. It's a wonderfully made story that makes the old G1 Villains look badass again! 
I can count myself lucky if i get at least half as much likes as he/she managed to get. The story is already over a year old and it inspired me to make a story myself... Anyways, i think i'm getting sentimental already again.
So, once again, feel free to comment and criticize. Also made a few grammar corrections in previous chapters. We don't want a thing like "Sanji the cock" to occur again, now do we?
PS.: Note to myself: still have to find out what this one is good for ->
Just for the record, I am a guy. And holy crap, I actually helped?
3344407 sure you have. Thanks to you i can finally see a decent plot (heck, even a Few short stories) for this fic. i'm even planning on a "Strawhat theatre" Episode. Perhaps you remember those :)
Wow, no comments yet?
This can be either good or bad... i hope i'll get some soon... don't worry, this story WILL get better, as mentioned above!
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this fic is really good and I would like to commend you about it
If I'm right, Strawhats won't meet Chopper until the Changeling Attack but they will be at Canterlot by then.
They just somehow always miss Chopper.
I don't know, this is just my idea.
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Are you able to read my mind? So yes, I've actually had this idea in mind!
Like, when the strawhats arrive, (As far as i know, ponyville isn't located directly on the coast so maybe they got there by using coup de bust or something) the poor innocent citizen ponies will have to deal with some real freaky guys. *cough*, franky... *cough*,*cough*,brook... and especially a very VERY hungry luffy! I can hardly wait to write that part
Also thanks for commenting, my friend. If it wouldnt have been for the view-meter, i would have sworn people forgot about my story, so it's a great relief to see it's not and it gave me a new confidence boost Thank you!:yay
Oh, and Merry Christmas to you! And happy birthday, Chopper!
3666465 Thank you so much for commenting! This kind of feedback gives me alot of confidence in pulling through this story for you!
Merry Christmas by the way!
I really want to see how the ponies react to his monster point (if you decide to include it), also, this seems incredibly well done, but short and some parts are questionable. After the rest of the straw hats get there, they are bound to win. The only way I can see Chopper gaining Celestia's full thrust is by saving her citizens, which he can't do very well because hes locked in brain point. Also, really like the story, please update soon,
I can't wait for the next update.
3782158 hey there, thanks for commenting! you don't happen to be capable of mindreading, are you? Because this will be pretty much how it will go down. I don't want spoil every detail but here's a little preview: Chopper will aid the ponies on their Mission of defeating Chrysalis and (once again) get the Elements back. But during their abscenece, horrible things happen within the castle's walls. By their return, it will turn out the changelings won't be the only Problem to deal with. Twilight and her team will get unexpected help and a lot of battles will be on the way...
Mindreading? hmmm... maybe. Not the first time this has happened. But its pretty much obvious that The Straw Hats will win. I just want to see how you handle Chopper being unable to use his Devil fruit powers. Maybe he'll find a way to get the bracelet off when there's trouble (In brain point he is almost useless) or use his medical knowledge to gain Celestia's trust. Either way, as long as at some point his Monster point is needed, I will read this story. (Im kidding, you dont have to include his monster point, though it would be funny.)
Ahhh... Kairoseki weakens Devil Fruit users as well as suppressing their abilities - Chopper should've looked, acted and been fairly tired from having it on him.
3810360 yeah, about that... Well i can remember of enies lobby, where robin had to wear them all the time while being with spandam. Sure, at towards the end she DID look quite worn out, but i thought that would be rather due to spandam beating her up all the time. Then again, there was that scene where luffy and co. got imprisoned by crocodile in a hole cage made of kairoseki/sea-prism. When luffy held onto it he said that he "suddenly felt so weak", so i get what you mean. But if i remember correctly, there was also water about up to his knees so maybe that just increased the weakening to a higher point. Maybe it has to do with how much of the kairoseki is touching the skin of the DF-user but i don't know, sorry...
my brain hurts...
3806378 Well, to me its just logic that the mugiwara's win. Although i'm not gonna make it too easy for them. As for the monster point: what kind of fan would i be if would make a chopper-focused story and not using his strongest form in it?
However, chopper will get into trouble by using a second rumble ball within 6 hours, but that will make him rediscover two older, improved forms he has almost forgotten about...
and yes, he WILL use the infamous third rumble ball and we all know what happens then...
I like this story a lot
can't wait for more 
3846769 thank you^^ i'll do my best :)
3782158 Gaining Celestia's full.. THRUST!? Dear god, i cannot unread this. O.e Princess Molestia, anyone?^u^
2387970. I dunno why, but for some reason i could watch that face all day... is that David Tennant, by the way?
Best thing ever
3892975 Aw, thank you! (\ d^o^b /)