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There is a lot of thing to learn when you are groomed to be a Prince of Equestria, that does not mean you must love every aspect of your life. Some are good like living in a castle or having the privelege to meet the most important ponies of Equestria. Some are bad like having to learn how to drink tea.
It's kinda related to my other story Royal Punishment. The idea was imagining how they started their relationship
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I like this Blueblood
Is the "S" key on your keyboard broken?
whaaa you undouche bagged blueblood lol
There's a good story idea in here, you just need to get some help with the writing. Keep writing, though, good ideas are hard to come by. :)
Is your title a reference to Princess Celestia Hates Tea, or is it a coincidence?
5623024 Yes, there hides a noble passionate soul under his snooty exterior.
I love this portrayal of Blueblood, It is good to see him as anything other than a snob.
the way you described Twilight in this story is pretty good.
all in all an enjoyable story.
Aw this is delightful, romance really is my thing, I guess he atleast likes her tea now.
I feel like there need to be more good blue blood with twilight ship, it one of my favor straight ships out there
8140752 Mine too!
You started out really strong. I really enjoyed the beginning, and you had some excellent characterization, but Twilight at the end becomes a sort of Bakadere, (here's a thing I found online about this type of charater)
Bakadere comes from the word “baka” meaning “idiot”, and “dere” meaning “lovey-dovey”. In other words, this type are quite a ditz or a klutz, and you're like a 10 year old when it comes to love, in the way you swoon over people so easily, and handle it so amateur-ly. and that is NOT who Twilight Sparkle is. You have taken a completely diferent character and given her twilights name and a love interest. The begining was great, but it is here
and here
when the Twilight I have grown to love becomes an insecure, love-blind doormat. I apologize for being such a harsh critic, and I don't want to discourage you from writing more projects, but if you are going to be writing in-universe, about a character that is so well established, and a character that we know, please think about how they would actually act in the situation you put them in. Twilight being hyper-focused on tea brewing, totally believable. Twilight accidentally using Blueblood as a stand-in spike, yeah, I can see that happening. I truly loved the beginning of your story, and the character and backstory you gave to my most and least favorite characters of the show. Your ending is where the story fell short, and I want to make you see where you went wrong. If this is before the events of The Best Night Ever but after the return of Nightmare Moon, then I can't really see Twilight having much of a relationship with a stallion from Canterlot but not talking to her brother at all. If it is before the Premiere, then Twi would likely be to busy with studying to fall in love with anypony, and that shiz is cannon, and if it's after the Gala, then Rarity would have told Twilight about it and she would never wish to speak to him again. In any of these cases, Twi would not be swooning over him like this. Until I get a better explanation I am going to count this as an alternate universe, similar yet different to the one we know. sorry about the rant, but I have a lot of steam to blow off from sifting through the murky waters trying to find a gem, and I thought I had found one, but I was let down. As I said, I don't want you to stop writing, and I wholeheartedly encourage improvement, and hope I don't stop you from creating more content in the future.
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Thank for the elaborated comment. This story happens before the premiere yes. The issue we have no idea how Twilight (in the show) react to being in love, so it's hard to state how she will be in this case. (Well, if you count the EqG movies, she is just super dumb). It could probably be an alternate universe for the fact she supposed to not have a strong friendship before the premiere like this one, but it's also unclear on how deep was her relation with her Canterlot unicorns friends at school.
But it's just a one shot that was fun to write :)