Ruby Moon is a thirty-year-old mare with what she think is a rather successful life. She is a sergeant in the Palace Guards and she doesn't have any issue finding willing stallions to relieve the stress of her work.
But one day, her temporary new affectation in the Crystal Empire will change her life for maybe the better.
After all, what could go wrong with dating an older crystal stallion?
Take place the in Quill and Blade universe created by the talented Anzel and Crystal Wishes, but it's not necessary to know the universe to read this story.
Chapters (6)
6202285 that doesn't seem good. I'm afraid to read it now lol.
Your story isn't bad, but you're desperately in need of a proof-reader/editor to clear up and improve the text and dialogue. You get past and present tense confused from time to time, and you also have issues with smooth dialogue.
Until improvements are made, I don't think I can give this a like, but I won't give it a dislike either.
Oh boy, where do I begin
I agree with Mythic Night.