Well, other than a few spelling errors and overuseage of a few phrases/words, this was great! Although, that doesn't really matter to me considering I just come here for the stories. I really should put mine up...
Anyway! Twilight is kind of freaking me out right now. While reading that beginning I just kept picturing the episode where she goes crazy over not sending Celestia a letter.
I am a bit surprised that Scootaloo seems to regret her relationship with RD, not something I expected, but that is why I'm loving this story right now, your doing a fantastic job of keeping me in suspense! I applaud you because that is not a task easily accomplished.
Ahhh first post! Yay new chapter! Haven't read it yet, just felt the need to covey my excitement!
Well, other than a few spelling errors and overuseage of a few phrases/words, this was great! Although, that doesn't really matter to me considering I just come here for the stories. I really should put mine up...
Anyway! Twilight is kind of freaking me out right now. While reading that beginning I just kept picturing the episode where she goes crazy over not sending Celestia a letter.
I am a bit surprised that Scootaloo seems to regret her relationship with RD, not something I expected, but that is why I'm loving this story right now, your doing a fantastic job of keeping me in suspense!
I applaud you because that is not a task easily accomplished.
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The first flight lesson reminded me of this picture
{implied sexual connotation but no genitalia visible}
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ScootaDash? Yep, I like it.