I agree Scoots, that was a terrible plan. Now I find myself hoping that Rarity doesn't cave and start fooling, but does cave and let SweetCherry come home.
568270 in hurcules pain and panic right after there attempt to kill baby hurcules are freaking out about not killing him until pain says "if he finds out" then panic says"if if is good"
on the way to Carasoul Butiuqe(totally spelled that wrong) cheerilie is freaking out and sweetie bell says "if were caught" and cheerilie responds with "If if is good"
there are few things that affect me reg[ulare rape [im okay w[ith [b[ut when a father takes advantage of h[is da[ughter thats when get p[issed [if co[uld [id k[ill that [basterd.
Throughout this story there is one thing that stood out to me now. You use the word 'now' too much and it would be far better if you simply removed the word 'now' and 'right now' anywhere it is not inside quotation marks now.
Never have i waited for another chapter so anxiously. Ug that rarity
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I agree Scoots, that was a terrible plan.
Now I find myself hoping that Rarity doesn't cave and start fooling, but does cave and let SweetCherry come home.
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in hurcules pain and panic right after there attempt to kill baby hurcules are freaking out about not killing him
until pain says "if he finds out"
then panic says"if if is good"
on the way to Carasoul Butiuqe(totally spelled that wrong) cheerilie is freaking out and sweetie bell says "if were caught" and cheerilie responds with "If if is good"
Ugh, I already put one and one together about what went on between Scootaloo and her dad, I did NOT need to see it described in detail
there are few things that affect me reg[ulare rape [im okay w[ith [b[ut when a father takes advantage of h[is da[ughter thats when get p[issed [if co[uld [id k[ill that [basterd.
590727>>1838846 welcome in the Realms of Corruption... my very home~~~ in an other way, but still... my very home~~~
*cynical sarcasm*
P.S. don't get the wrong ideas...
and I'm not going to tell more...
That first part killed my wingboner so fast it was like Flying in a snowstorm. Total wing shrinkage
Hmm, the longer this goes the more I want Rarity to murder Twilight after breaking Scoot's neck like a dry twig...
Throughout this story there is one thing that stood out to me now. You use the word 'now' too much and it would be far better if you simply removed the word 'now' and 'right now' anywhere it is not inside quotation marks now.
he
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Wrap Up
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So full of murderous rage to Scoots father.