The Force of Friendship (1. A New World)

by Bronysith

Appreciations.

Hey guys it's Bronysith. Thank you all for the support. I hope you enjoyed reading my story as I did creating it.

Special thanks to-
George Lucas. For the original trilogy.
Lauren Faust for making the great show My Little Pony: Friendship is magic.
Hasbro for not suing me.
George R.R Martin, and Christopher Paoliny, whom inspired me to write.

My friends Xmasskills, Cachi01, TheRainbowDash, CCCP, LunaTheBeloved, Biglaw, Bacon[Hazard], and all my friends from Bronystate.net who have supported me in this story since day 1.
Also my l4d2 brony buds. whom i play on steam with nearly everyday
JaketehSnake
Midnight Tempest
Meanwhile
Kirzystryfe
Jim
Tarku
TheGreatandPowerfulT
UnFoundBug
Dr.Shamrocs
and nittany_Tiger

Anyways I do not want it to end here. So I am starting a sequel immediately. I have released the Prologue. It is The Force of Friendship (Family) I submitted the story and is up and running.

May the Force be with you all.

-Bronysith

Comments

[Khorne]

You're really pushing your luck with 100 thumbs up.

[CCCP]

:) i hope you get there

[Biglaw]

YAY! Honorable Mention!

[Bronysith]

583241 Thank you my good man.
May the force be with you.

-Bronysith

[Bronysith]

595277 hey, glad you like it man. I have loved the original trilogy ever since I was 8 or something.

May the force be with you.

-Bronysith

[TheRainbowDash]

I love being an honorable mention! Well this was an amazing story, and I completely applaud you for this. I can read this over and over again, and gladly say that, "I supported this amazing author...my..my friend wrote this."

[Bronysith]

605554 well. the thing is. I never said he was a lord of evil. Have you ever heard of a gray sith?

[ghostlywolf]

GAH! finaly done now i can get to the fanfic that started this quest

[Thespurgin]

Well, to be honest the story seems a lot like a self-insertion fic, and to me was painfully predictable in plot, as well as having a few cheesy lines and not nearly enough detail to do it justice.

That being said, you managed to finish it, and pull it off. That kind of guts impresses me. The relationship-details may have been a bit shallow, and the plot very accelerated, but it all-in-all the story was decent. I will go read your sequel and look for improvement shall I?

[Bronysith]

625839 Thank you for the constructive criticism. TBH these fanfics are a practice before I actually write a book later on. They are my first fanfics so I do have a little difficulty getting all the details in without my head going but ty for the support man.

May the force be with you,

-Bronysith

[Bronysith]

807796 Why thank you my good sir. These fanfics i wrote were practice for writing a book with my brother. It was awesome practice for sure. lol

Thank you for the praise.

May the force be with you

-Bronysith

[Zellor]

I expected Alexx do die, but he didnt! and i'm happy because of that since most stories make the main character DIE!

With that being said and done. This has been a amazing story!

May the force be with you.

[Bronysith]

853244 he is no jedi either mate. now if you exuse me, i have an appointment with freezing george lucas in carbonite.

[Bronysith]

891756 yea this was my first piece of literature. my pacing was awful. honestly, this was just practice before i wrote a book, which i am currently writing after learning some better writing techniques. thanks for the read

[Paladin Redflare]

Yes... YES. If I was this Sith, I would take over Equestria, and force upon them the dominion of Humanity!

[Bronysith]

1348557 if i had him take over equestria, then he would have to be more powerful than the princesses and that is just making a mary sue and it has been done a million or so more times.

[Bronysith]

1353641 Vader was instantly Darth...

[neorenamon]

558706 Equestria? Land of no hatred? Really? Yeah, I can't suspend that disbelief for any story.