• Member Since 18th Jul, 2013
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RustyKat


Losing my mind, and proud of it!

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Bowtie only wanted a good date. But things didn't go exactly as planned....

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Comments ( 20 )

It was uhh not my cup of story, just meh

You could have done so much more than that. Really... SO MUCH MORE. It's short... it's nice but it's short.

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) dose socks m8

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) fkn notty m8.
0/8 fk this sht- ign.
you should work on A LOTOLOTOLOTOLOTOLOTOLOT of thingies. Some grammar mistakes, and also socks. It might be some kind of wierd fetish you have, but socks are normally accompanied by shoes. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) no fkn shoes here m9.

there was no point besides a quick dash of some heroism. But if the changeling said he was going to dispose of him, how come when he was actually confronted by him, he was a fkn noob and got rekt in like two moves? and not that this has anything to do with the story but what in the 420blazes is Bowtie's fkn talent? tying a bowtie? watever.

i r8 this 2/8 not tht gr8 m8. altho i congradul8 for dis.

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5362701 It's a short story. :facehoof: I'm sorry. It's my first SHORT story here..... and my first concept of socks to my readers. Second, I was never good at grammar. :fluttershysad: BowTie is an OC in which his destiny was given to him in a dream. He does not know what this means, so he thinks he should wear a bowtie everyday.

5364834 oh shite mum git the camera!!1!1
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) rite rite m80 i get u. but u can always double check, and try your best at proper typing nd sht. it takes tiem, but it will be worth it wen ppl cant find anything 2 complain about cus u type so pretty no h0m0.
cool st0ry m8. and im not being sercastik, so u can tayk dubble poynts 4 tht m90. u shud try to introduce him 1st. u mite get super flame or be complimented depending on ur intro to xXx_Blowtie_xXx. u shud however, r3ad the guide tht is sujestid. its abit out of date, but it teaches decent story writing skills tht u can werk on.
cheers m8

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5364860 :scootangel: Thanks. I'll put a prologue.

5364871 no m8. this story is as it's own.
saying his past in a story that has to do with his future(i think) is a bad idea. it'll seem to rushed.

just make a whole other one. only if you want, though. dont let me boss u around just cus im mlg ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

5364900 Whoops! Prologue already made! :trollestia:

Man bow ties are a bitch to tie.

5372178 especially when you have hooves.:trollestia:

So.... he randomly has his cutie mark when born.:trixieshiftright: Ramdomly gets a date with the element of Loyalty. How did they even meet? So much lack of detail.:ajbemused:

Interesting...

I like it, interesting.

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