Bowtie only wanted a good date. But things didn't go exactly as planned....
Losing my mind, and proud of it!
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Socks huh
It was uhh not my cup of story, just meh
You could have done so much more than that. Really... SO MUCH MORE. It's short... it's nice but it's short.
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) dose socks m8
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) fkn notty m8.
0/8 fk this sht- ign.
you should work on A LOTOLOTOLOTOLOTOLOTOLOT of thingies. Some grammar mistakes, and also socks. It might be some kind of wierd fetish you have, but socks are normally accompanied by shoes. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) no fkn shoes here m9.
there was no point besides a quick dash of some heroism. But if the changeling said he was going to dispose of him, how come when he was actually confronted by him, he was a fkn noob and got rekt in like two moves? and not that this has anything to do with the story but what in the 420blazes is Bowtie's fkn talent? tying a bowtie? watever.
i r8 this 2/8 not tht gr8 m8. altho i congradul8 for dis.
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5362701 It's a short story. I'm sorry. It's my first SHORT story here..... and my first concept of socks to my readers. Second, I was never good at grammar. BowTie is an OC in which his destiny was given to him in a dream. He does not know what this means, so he thinks he should wear a bowtie everyday.
5364834 oh shite mum git the camera!!1!1
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) rite rite m80 i get u. but u can always double check, and try your best at proper typing nd sht. it takes tiem, but it will be worth it wen ppl cant find anything 2 complain about cus u type so pretty no h0m0.
cool st0ry m8. and im not being sercastik, so u can tayk dubble poynts 4 tht m90. u shud try to introduce him 1st. u mite get super flame or be complimented depending on ur intro to xXx_Blowtie_xXx. u shud however, r3ad the guide tht is sujestid. its abit out of date, but it teaches decent story writing skills tht u can werk on.
cheers m8
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
5364860 Thanks. I'll put a prologue.
5364871 no m8. this story is as it's own.
saying his past in a story that has to do with his future(i think) is a bad idea. it'll seem to rushed.
just make a whole other one. only if you want, though. dont let me boss u around just cus im mlg ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
5364900 Whoops! Prologue already made!
Man bow ties are a bitch to tie.
5372178 especially when you have hooves.
So.... he randomly has his cutie mark when born. Ramdomly gets a date with the element of Loyalty. How did they even meet? So much lack of detail.
Interesting...
I like it, interesting.
5436626 thanks.
5377033 Thats why I stick with an ascot/cravat.
5476733 ohhh... seems legit.
5478835 FASHION!!!!