Pinkiepie was helping out in the library within the Castle of Friendship when Twiight began to bumble tiredly down the stairs holding a sone box within her magic. Pinkiepie finds the box intriguing and intends to find out what it does. Upon getting the box she opens it and finds a strange object. When the next moring comes, Twilight and Pinkie won't ever be the same.
Note from Author: There will be some plot changes due to the new editor I just got. I hope that you aren't turned of by them.
Chapters (10)
Pretty short, but yeah, I think if you do more it can be good.
I perfer longer chapter, but still, intresting start!
Can't wait to see what pinkie messes up!
You sir, need an editor (Someone who I also need).
But none the less this has quite the potential.
I got a dislike . . .
This is getting more intresting.
5241663 I think that's a compliment so . . . THANKS!
What just happened.
5300109 You sure you wanna know? I don't want to spoil the story for you.
DO NOT. Point out the pattern in how many words there are or I'm going to go Lesson Pinkamena Zero on yo buns!
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
3 likes to 3 dislikes
time to upset the balance
*hits like button
5339589 I acccidently disliked it and since it was even and I don't know how to undo disliking without liking it I kept it. Thank you!
(PS: Did you read the whole thing yet?)
5342002
why yes ive read evrything up to this point, i do hope it continues it is quite funny
5342073 This comment just *wipes tear* . . . All I have to say is I'm writing more chapters.
5342073 Do you think I should add a comedy tag?
5342865
to tell u the truth i just noticed their wasn't one, i honestly don't look at tags
i usually look at the story concept then dive in hoping the author brought justice to the idea
which admittedly you are doing wonderfully in my eyes.
if i had to say...
yes
mostly because that it is one of the main focuses of the story, while it has its moments of seriousness its mostly just to set up jokes farther along the line
unless your going with a serious oriented route in wich case you should definitely forgo the comedy tag
5343055 Just added the tag.
Mr. E (Can I call you that?) I was just wondering do you have anything you would like to see in Chapter 6?
5345751
id be fine with you calling me that
well maybe one idea if the bit with rainbow and co are finished
seeing Luna in all this would be funny her mixed reactions about the one who actively destroyed her progress during nightmare night(pinkie) and the one who built it from nothing and who was most likely her first friend(twilight) would be fun to watch
5345901 Yeah, that seems fair. I didn't really want to write the last chapter except for the fight scene. I felt like I was kinda going the through the motions. I just needed to get it established that the the ithers know who Twipie is.
Your Luna idea is brillant Mr. E! I will add that to the next chapter but, can you inform me why Luna is meeting TwiPie?
5345950
well if were thinking rationale Celestia is back at canterlot and from what we saw earlier somewhat amused, luna enters, broaches the subject,finds out about twipie and now wants to check up on what is possibly her very first friends condition
her logical side may want to see if the elements still work which will lead you into that topic aswell
5345967 Also, the Mane Six are going to be at the beginning of the Chapter. I'll try to make TwiPie's time with them short.
5346045
absolutly no problem, im just glad i got to steer this fic along alittle bit otherwise im here for the ride
the very funny ride
Exaxxion used sacred ashes, Zekrom was fully revived....
Zekrom used cliffhanger.... it was super effective
the reader is getting pumped
the reader became impatient..... he hurt himself in his impatience
i liked it but now im giddy over this story idea your proposing, do we send you private messages about the OC's
or just explain them in a comment, i think ill send them with a private message so that it doesn't clutter the comment box
ive got a few OC's but their not ponies, i can fix that real quick
5377686 They don't have to be ponies. Comments are fine but, PMing would be more convient..
you carpet bombed with feels, out of nowhere
5382514 Yeah, i know. I'm sorry. I wasn't really thinking I just wrote.
5382514 Should I just rewrite it? Without feels?
5382521
no dont apoligize its fine i just wasnt expecting feels, especially with it all of a sudden
5382531 Okay, cool!
Also, I want to talk to you about your OC's over PM. I want to have them reprensented well in OC Battle!
5382554
id still have to find them first
5382562 K just tell me when you do. (Didn't mean to reply so late just was eating hot pockets)
5382562 Also PM me about them so the comment box isn't as cluttered.
i am officially watching you
im also your first follower apperantly
Huh, well that happened.
5986705 Yeah, I didn't really plan this out at all. I kinda just wrote it because Exaxxion in the comments kept me writing it. I was actually going to scrap it and possibly not write anymore for a while because of Look to the left's last comment. However, when Exaxxion started commenting I decided that I should continue since he enjoyed it. Thus me not caring as much and still being a new to writing i just wrote whatever came to me with little to no second thoughts. In the future I'm planning to remaster the story and hopefully make it better sometime around the summer so, there will most likely be a less sporadic and won't leave loose ends.
5988468 Yeah, I mean I like the concept, but quite a few things certainly could be improved. :)
Here, have a follow so I can keep posted on potential updates. ;)