Master of dimensions... Pleaser of crowds... I am... Dimentio
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During a recent accident, Pinkie Pie was forced to go to the hospital where she was exposed to X-Rays...she then discovered she was more than a normal mare. She was part mare....and part skeleton. A skeleton mare! Twilight seems convinced that she's just a regular mare, or at least as normal as Pinkie could be.
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What
>Ecocat<
4874904 That
>Dimentio<
I think I'm gonna have to join that club...
all those parts in the chapter who wants to make you shout : Skeleton mare !
it seems the power of Calcium can't beat the Scales....or may be that dragon is cheating.....
I'm really tempted to upvote just from the premise.
Required viewing:
4875048 They have punch.
4875061
~~WIN~~
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4875059 goddamnit i was gonna post that
Just think, you guys.
Right now, there is a skeleton inside you.
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4875334 Hey! This story is rated E for everyone.
That cracked me up so much.
Is anyone else on the site? I'm lonely
4876368 it's a pinkie story no questions.
No words can describe the combination of confusion, conundrums, and chortles I just went though.
4877110 I suppose I could, I still don't prefer to question it.
4877393 Success!
Oh the LOLZ!!
I love that song.
4879842 It's a hard song not to like.
2spooky4me.
Fact: If you lick your teeth, you can taste the skeleton inside you
#2spoopy
4880813 Still a rated Everyone story but...
4880885
It should be rated S.
For SPOOKY.
4880893 True enough...it seems that the S rating was removed. Now that is spoopy
I...do not know how to react to this.
4888564 Then you are doing it right.
What?
4891119 That
Nice Idea! The story starts out really good! But I think it is kind of missing a conclusion. Either by resolving the situation in some kind or by doing a really good pun that you don't see coming in the end. As it is, it kind of sets up a great concept and then just ends right in the middle...
Remember: There's a bit of Skeleton Mare inside everypony.
This made me chuckle, right on.
Can't wait to see the epic battle between Skeleton Mare and Tooth Decay!
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Haha I saw the title of this story and immediately thought of the Axis of Awesome song, the more the story went on I felt sure it was based on it and then at the end was the proof
Great story based on a song that makes me laugh EVERY TIME 
But skeleton man saw through his plans... with his skeleton eyes!
I wouldn't rib you, but as humerus as it is, this is a very strange joint. Is it cannon?
5352543 You. I like you.
5352543 It is indeed, and I have a bone to pick with anyone who argues.
5353907
Well, now, how else can I applaud this story... How about a (yet another) bad rewrite of the first verse of "Particle Man?"
Skeleton Mare, Skeleton Mare,
She's loco in the coco, but all she'd care!
Tibia hero, she!
Bad guys flee--
Skeleton Mare.
Grinning throughout while reading this fic. So, that video is the inspiration for this fic eh. Utterly silly. I better calm down before my face freeze in a grin.
Some specifics I liked:
1. "Crime is a disease...and calcium is the best cure."
- LOL. And Vitamin D.
2. Nooooo! Oh, it echoes in here, never noticed that. Hello! Hello!Hello! hehehe.
- Lol!
3. Calcium Colt. Good show!
4. Pinkie Pie lied...Pinkie Lie.
- Pinkie Lie. Cuz it rhymes!
5. Discord handed Pinkie what appeared to be the skeleton of a parrot. As Fluttershy stared in horror, she could not bear to look at the dead bird. Suddenly, the little creature squawked causing Fluttershy to faint in surprise.
- My first fic-scene of Discord ever since I started reading fics.
6. "Skin Mare!?! That means that the other figure must be Scale Drake!" Pinkie exclaimed to a confused and suddenly costumed Twilight and Spike.
- Oh dear me. The names!
Possible Errors:
1. "Pinkie? What's wrong!?" Twilight yelled as she raced to he friend's side.
- "Pinkie? What's wrong!?" Twilight yelled as she raced to her friend's side.
2. Applejack shuddered, whoever this was definitely wasn't a lying.
- "...whoever this was, definitely wasn't lying."
3. "ah'm not going to make a lasso out of anypony's skeleton."
- Capitalize?
5396574 I know it's a bit late, but I really appreciate it! I'm going to try to get an editor to officially give this a look over before I write the sequel. Sorry for the...oh, fifteen weeks
...Sorry.
5829208 No prob. I appreciate that you appreciate.
First thing that comes to mind when I think if a skeleton-based hero mixed with a pony:
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Funny read up vote
What did I just read?
Whatever it is, I like it. 
Minor quibbles: First, you have Pinkie walking into a wall for hours. She might, but that makes the day too long and I feel like someone would have noticed at that point. Second, you say "days later" instead of either "later that day" or maybe "the next day", which seems to be the intent.
...Then again, the timeline clearly breaks down completely and deliberately towards the end so it may be intentional. XP
Quite amusing, anyway. Axis of Awesome is... well... awesome.
Skeleton Mare to the rescue!
Featured in January for Rated 'E' for Everyone
Hee-hee, "Pinkie lie"!..
Either the whole story is too random... or there could have been a less abrupt ending.
Wait! I've got this one!..
Ahem. Papyrus would be proud
!