The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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ooooh, boy this will back-fire hilariously on Luna.
Bloody hilariously.
their powerful
Oh, so that's how it is.
The second you find someone who actually gives the human an equal footing, you ponies ... ummm ... I don't actually know what is about to happen, but I'm sure that it is going to piss me off.
So write faster or something.
By the way Luna has to understand that this massive violation of trust is going to have major backlash. I mean she abducted one off the human leaders and all.
Oh, and I swear to God, if they pull some permanent magical surpression bullshit, I will reach into this story and punch Luna and Celestia in the taint.
4880649 Maybe . . .
4880727 It's not the taint, on any female it's called the perineum.
I . . . guess I should be glad that my writing is so emotionally involving for my readers. Do not worry, all will be rectified.
Dammit, Moon Horse. This is why you get so few episodes.
4880995 . . . . . . . . . Moon Horse . . . . . . . . . . oooookayyyyy . . . . . . . . . . . . *snicker*
Teleportation... I don't like this... Even with a powerful caster there wouldn't be a need to pull something like this unless she's honestly scared. No, definitely no reason was given here but there must be one, especially since Celestia signed off on the use of these collars.
Not bad, although I did notice a grammar error I'm the second to last paragraph here:
The large, bold and underlined word should just be the letter "a". I imagine this was an editing mistake is all but it's best to keep you on your toes. Good job and keep up the good work.
4882271 Thanks for letting me know about the oops I made. I'll fix that right away.
Ah, I think you confused Omnipotence with Omniscience in this chapter.
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4938196 I'm gunna rape her with a cactus, like the motherbucking whorse she is.
4882271
I'm not sure Celestia did sign off on that.
omnipotence to omniscient?
I would like to Quote Deus if I may...CUNT!!! also orig04.deviantart.net/a9a9/f/2013/109/0/1/deus_ex_machina_magic_card_by_uwoodward-d62awlm.jpg
6283611 Do not worry good sir, she gets hers... several times over.
Still irks me to no end when the princesses pull this shit. Their explanations aren't straight forward like a lot of people say they want it. At the same time, sometimes you need to explain along the way.
Jeez, I'm not contemplating this tonight. Next chapter!!
Wonder what it was that shocked both Catalyst and Luna that it forced them to use a collar....
Luna is officially fucking evil. The a'dam is illegal for a reason and somepony like Luna uses it? It violates all basic rights and moralities! Damn, I'm going to have a fun time reading this story. I usually write down all the insults I have for a character in stories, and there will be a long one for Luna...
I usually like luna. (Best princess, lol)
You made me dislike her.
You jerk.
You devious, amazing, mind-boggling jerk.
I am impressed.
9484819 Why do you dislike her? She did what she thought was right. It turned out that she was dead-wrong, but she was convinced she was right and she went about it with no loss of life.