The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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Bells! Yes!
You missed a couple indents and your two biggest paragraphs could stand to be broken up a bit. If thats okay with you.
SHOCK LANCES?!
KEEP CALM AND PONY ON?!
And on top of that your reference those objects of The Age of Legends as an object from the time of King Sombra.
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When Luna first pulled out the collars, I thought you were handing her the idiot ball.
Then we found out she was lying about the collars being just magic nullifiers, and they were actually made to strip the wearer of all the trappings of free will. I thought Luna needed another time-out on the moon, for even owning such a thing.
In the last few chapters, I saw that Luna is neither completely incompetent, nor morally bankrupt. She just has an alien set of values. Apparently, Ponies will wipe themselves out, if not rigidly controlled, and that's what she's used to dealing with.
...and Chris inadvertently choked to death, laughing his a$$ off.
5062366 this times 1000
"Catalyst had been greatly saddened when the Dragons refused to allow her to study their natural magic."
I assume then that the information she does have is either from observation or she got permission to examine Spike at some point.
5062063 Let me take a look. I was maybe... a little... drunk when I posted the new chapter last night.
Alright broke up a few of the larger paragraphs, but I don't see anywhere that I missed indenting a paragraph. If you're referring to the first line after the three asterisks, that is a line of quoted speech which does not have to be indented, or were you refering to something else?
That was nice
Luna with bell collar?...
Hmmm... Kinky...
Luna wearing a bell collar...
Must resist compulsion to play with the bells.
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We need fan art of this!
...Antifa, some factions of BLM, the Liberal party of Canada... I said that out loud, didn't I?
9486491 Glad you did. Be honest. Remember, it is whom you cannot make fun of, who runs your part of the world.
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“SHIELD, Hydra—two sides of a coin that’s no longer currency.”—Baron Wolfgang von Strucker
His comment might be true in the Marvel Cinematic Universe, but unfortunately, the “currency” he was speaking about is the only currency that exists in THIS world: racism, fanaticism, fascism, divisiveness, ideology, identity politics.... those are the notes of denomination for the currency being used here