The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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I have to say that the scene with Artex and Oriana felt really off or at least Artex's reaction was. The first reaction to waking up to a strange person (and especially a strange pony) in your bed when you know (or in this case thought) you went to bed alone is a panicked scream and a scramble to get away. Artex should have been much more agitated about the whole situation during this scene, yelling what the hell she's doing here, rather than being so (relatively) calm and rational. Plus, he never asks her if this is something she herself actually wants. That said, I was expecting this plot development from the last chapter, just not this way.
5257044 The reaction you were expecting is a common misconception. My wife and a bunch of my friends played a prank on me once where the girlfriend of one of my friends switched places with my wife and they all recorded my reaction. I based Artex Reaction on my own reaction.
Stop feeding Celestia cake.
Also: Artex's reaction to waking up with a zebra in his bed was not normal. Considering he's done a lot of missing on his wife, he should rightfully have freaked out. Yelling optional.
5257182 The reaction you were expecting is a common misconception. My wife and a bunch of my friends played a prank on me once where the girlfriend of one of my friends switched places with my wife and they all recorded my reaction. I based Artex Reaction on my own reaction.
5257359 Thanks for clarifying.
That last paragraph, makes it sound like the female is human. If it is, NEW HUMANS!!! Should be interesting. Poor Artex is about to get very busy.
5258832 You have no idea good sir.
5258843 Dan's wife, maybe? I has very good, vivid imagination, thank you very much.
Its like a compact and refined version of the Mid West land grab and settlement? Still not sure about the value of a bit either, such as a bit for a carrot is less than a dollar, or those are really big carrots. I just remember from looking up medaevil prices, that when bartering a chicken was suprisingly cheap, at a dozen eggs. Unless chickens laid really slow back then and that was a months or more time to lay.
Suprise exotic in bed is a suprise. Although be glad it wasnt the normal for Ponyville, Pinkie.
The last sentence is another changeling? Or an existing changeling that Im getting confused is who?
5258864 That will be revealed in the next chapter, which I just sent to my main editor: Nightwatch. You all should see it up tomorrow.
And so it dose... interesting ending their
5463994 the typos made the plot thicken?
Seems that way.
Also the part with Oriana was magnificent laughter fuel. Accidental marriage is best marriage^^.
Who dat person creepin' near the treeline?
Are you trying to steal my hamburger? IT MIEN!!!
STAHP TRYING TO LOOK AT MY SCREEN WHEN I'M TYPING MAH PAZZWURDZ!! NIEN!!
Exclamation: SH#T! THIS IS BAD!
wtf would changeling cuisine look like?? is it something like they'd order a cat or something then they'd just sit there and pet it? lmao, that'd be funny. "Whatcha want? dog? cat? bird? gotta a pretty big selection here for ya." lmao i cant stop laughing
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