The residents of New Humansville continue to work toward a better and more stable society in their new home of Equestria, before the big announcement of their existence by Princess Celestia and Princess Luna to the rest of the world.
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These aren't the only instances, but remember that when it's explained how it's said to use a comma, not a period. Also, your formatting for text is kinda... wonky. You start a new paragraph when you start a new speaker, yes, but things like
aren't correct, since technically the 'new speaker' starts with 'Fleur-de-lis', so it should instead look like this:
Other than that, great chapter! Fleur's reaction was heartwarming... now get back to the action already.
5528479 Meh, established habit.
I'M KEEPING IT WRONG! Muahahaha!
Hopefully will be able to post another chapter tomorrow as well.
My feels are happy.
Also nursing the baby for Fluer is going to be exceptionally awkward or impossible considering where Kavim teats are. Might have to invent a pump.
I was rooting for them. Now the long process of learning humanities quirks begins.
Fancy, Fleur, j-ew can do ee-t! (I really hope they can)
One little thing i thought was kind of humorous, Artex, Razor, and Oriana, sure did a lot of assuming there at first. They should be careful about doing that.
You know what? Residents of New Numanswille wish to burn "ambassador" at the stake for his adoption of policy which they had not even bothered to ask.
5531080 Your statement is a bit difficult to understand. Would you be willing to rephrase it?
Yaay Fancy Pants. Decent setup as well, although bit hve been altered in preparation as well. Wonder where the servants, supporting employees rooms are in this place. How many have been retrained to use secondary abilities, o even primary, and were doing housework on the side? Like Diamnod Tiaras butler. Old and staid, but a great clown in abilities?
Am I reading two stories here? as I thought the baby had already een born, which is why the adoption procedure, or is it a deiffernt baby they arte talking about here? To go in four days etc?
Fancy and Fleur are so adorable, trying so hard to prepare to be good parents.
They're busting their asses to show their maturity and responsibility, and I just want to talk baby talk at them, while pinching their widdle cheeks. It's hard to take a species seriously when they look like children's plush toys.
The kid could certainly do worse.
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Sorry, my bad english.
When the human community learns about the adoption of the "ambassador" of individual decisions on the orders of the princesses, there will be a riot.
Of course, if you describe a realistic, approximate to the earthly human society.
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The adoptive parents are being relocated to New Humansville, to be educated by the Human community. The Humans will get their chance to evaluate the ponies' fitness as parents. If the members of the Human community have any objections, they'll have 6 months to voice them.
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It does not matter.
I will ask that there not be any flame wars in the comments section please. Everybody is perfectly allowed to express their opinion and I encourage that, but please do not become belligerent or offensive or criticize other readers for voicing their thoughts. I am not making an accusation, only issuing a warning. Anything needlessly offensive or derogatory will be deleted by me. You can debate ideas and notions freely if you wish, but I ask that there be no name-calling of each other (you can refer to characters of the story as jerks or some such if you feel so inclined).
I appreciate the support and that the story makes people passionate about it. You readers are why I continue. Feel free to send me a P.M. if you have something to express that may not be suitable for the public comments section. Thank you again for reading. I'm working on posting a new chapter right now... and it's not tiny.
Typo detected! "even in Artex opinion" I guess you meant " even in Artex's opinion"
dining room (dinning refers to making very loud noises, not eating)
choose
'were a fact of life'
had
'of the deceased cow'
(oh, and I read the comments after each chapter and try not to repeat typos that others have mentioned already, but some comments about typos seem not to be getting noticed, just a friendly 'heads up' as it were, Sir Truthseeker)
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Honestly im kind of curious if humans would need more or less social contact during developement. After all, insufficient positive physical social contact is a potential cause of SIDS.
8968515 How are you liking the second story so far?
Fleur is going to be shocked when she finds out how long she’ll have to nurse the kid.