I want to laugh so hard, but at the same time, that mail fraud bit was out of place in the story. The rest of it was perfect, though.

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It is rather silly in tone for an otherwise serious story, but to be honest I felt like this story was already drowning in seriousness and I felt like it was becoming something that I as an author didn't like (odd, but true).

Let me ask you: If I ended this instead right after Clover sat down, defeated, with her big ol' box o' chemicals, then would that be better?

>Let me ask you: If I ended this instead right after Clover sat down, defeated, with her big ol' box o' chemicals, then would that be better?

You know, maybe. But it's not an either or thing, really. I'd RATHER that it got an ending that still fleshed out everything, but remained constant in tone. If every serious story became silly at the end, we'd have some very strange cancer tales. I'm not saying that you can't have the humor, but the large role it played, and the amount of space it took up, and the sheer ridiculousness of it it all jarring and out of place. It's a nice segment, but not one I see working HERE.

This IS a very serious story, one that deals with some emotional real life issues. I just feel that you should have stayed true to the story, and if you felt like writing something more humorous, you should have done that in another story.

528016 eh, it's your story, who are we to judge on how your stories end. Sure we can influence it, but the final decision is up to you.

I-I-I like this. Mainly cause I'm bisexual so I'd do either gender. But this was a cool story. Maybe you should make like a bondage style story with the Mail Demon and Clover. I dunno just a suggestion.

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Tee-hee, sounds like a great idea!

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This is outrageous

I did it, I finally got through one of your stories! No offense, I just haven't been in much of a reading/writing mood just lately, finally got back into the swing of things and got around to reading this first up

Great story, really, really enjoyed it Even if its not my usual fare, I still found myself loving it start to finish. The ending might have been a touch jarring, but hey, it was good to see Clover get what was coming too her. Plus it had me in stitches the entire time

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Thanks!

Yeah, it's a very serious beginning but I went for more humor as things went on. I like the ending a lot. Mailer Daemon is best poni.

594170 Haha, no argument from me

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Now please read more of my stuff!

I need inspiration because I wanted to do a quickie one tonight... or maybe write more for my incomplete stories...

594187 I plan too, don't worry Will provide ideas as I think of them as well.

Well I learn something about this: Don't do mail fraud, face wrath of The Mailer Demon alicorn.

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Correct!

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Why in the world did I enjoy reading this.

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Well, I wrote it to be enjoyable (hopefully)... so, ah, thanks!

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Hehe

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Thanks, I really tried to make this both lustful and super emotional in a sort of touching way; so that you really feel for Soarin'

Glad that you liked it!

Wow, that was better than I thought it'd be. Gotta admit that I wished it hadn't ended there (at least, not before another clop scene with Soarin... )

I fucking love you, you magnificent bastard!! you are my number 5 besst writter here!

I've said it to other authors and i'll say it to you as well, wonderful fic, and ten-thousand mustaches to the one who makes me a Tom x Rocky clopfic

I loved it

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That was... not exactly what I was expecting. This story has really great potential, but it was a bit too short for my tastes. You could have really made it epic if you wanted to. With just a bit more time fleshing out the characters, you could have really developed an interesting dynamic between the main character and Soarin. I also think Soarin is hot, don't know why... but whatever. So yeah, lot of potential here I would like to see more fics with a similar theme.

I think the ban hammer just struck......

Im a straight dude, and I approve this fic!
This is my first male human on stallion fic.

Now if only real mail daemons were this cool

the last part was greatshe got what she was coming to her

Am I the only one seeing a problem with the groups?

Well, that's certainly an interesting take on the "red-and-black alicorn" phenomenon.

It was a bit short for me, but it was still rather enjoyable.

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No I see it too.

Casanova Frankenstein

Is god dam BRILLIANT!

This story is worth reading, Just for him alone! Brilliant character idea and fantastic execution!

Monk
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