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NeonWabbit

NeonWabbit #1 · Jan 9th, 2012 · · ·

That was simply one of the best stories I've ever laid eyes upon.

Dat Derpy.

Please, keep writing more stories like this!

BobtheLurker

BobtheLurker #2 · Feb 4th, 2012 · · ·

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Jas362

Jas362 #3 · Mar 21st, 2012 · · ·

*Clicks Like*

brijbee

brijbee #4 · Mar 21st, 2012 · · ·

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Farnham

Farnham #5 · Mar 21st, 2012 · · ·

I remember this story, good stuff.

leonsdrago619

leonsdrago619 #6 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Needs more chapters, must hear other escapades from Soarin'

Starnight

Starnight #7 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Whoa.

WetWilly

WetWilly #8 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Like x1000. Best clopfic of ALL TIME.

NoPony YouKnow

NoPony YouKnow #9 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Thanks for the appreciation bronies. I certainly see myself writing more Soarin in the future but Celestia only knows when.

Little Lollipop

Little Lollipop #10 · Jul 29th, 2012 · · ·

Great, I"m all hot and bothered now.

Wait, that's a good thing. That means you did good. Write more. Like now

articunos bitch

articunos bitch #11 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · ·

Soarin leaned closer without missing a beat, this mare was genuine and he’d know if she was trying to play him.

Derpy could not lie if Dinky's life depended on it.

Soarin had along a volunteer from the speedsters who would need to know he was going to be busy.

Capitalize speedsters.

it had been too long since she last had anything between her legs.

How long was it exactly? Both the time and the last thing?

she wondered at the kind of mare who doesn’t scream and freak out when she suddenly gets a stallions load to the face.

An unexpected load.

blood was currently being diverted from his brain and all it seemed to be doing anyway was chanting “do em both, do em both”

Sounds like a good plan.
This is pretty good. And so long ago I bet you forgot didn't you? FimFiction didn't forget.

NoPony YouKnow

NoPony YouKnow #12 · Jul 15th, 2015 · · ·

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So Long ago I can't even remember how to edit it to fix those changes you helpfully pointed out many moons ago.
I am the least active writer ever. Thank goodness I didn't start a wildly popular series only to disappoint everyone as I randomly go on YEARS LONG hiatuses. Haitusi?

articunos bitch