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Duelist96


Retired writer of almost anything. Lover of RariDash and background ponies.

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6893855 It's usually how it goes. Any story that is rated mature, especially when it contains sex, will already get instant downvotes.

6893977 It's the internet. For what moderate to minimal impact it ultimately has, calling it out just makes the trolls happy and encourages them to do it more.

The vast majority of people aren't jackasses by nature. The FiMfic staff has done what they can to counter the issues already, such as hiding the rating until it crosses a threshold of 10 votes or so, if I recall.

6894794

"I made a wacky story where Celestia and Vinyl Scratch switch manes! XD"

First off, laughing very hard because I know what story you're talking about.

Secondly, this is how it has always been with my stories. It seems like my one-shots will hardly get any recognition, but writing an actual story will garner attention immediately. It seems like I'm that type of author instead of being one that can do both.

I'm still going to continue writing one-shots either way because I enjoy what I write in mine. It makes it more fun for myself as well because I don't put up any tags for what's in it.

6894853 Yeah, I understand what you mean. A few times I actually broke down on my writing because of what has been happening with this site. I tried to appeal to so many people, that I realized something.

I write these stories for others to enjoy, but I keep it so that I enjoy writing it. I write more about what I like, avoiding trying to feed others what they want to see. The writing needs to be enjoyed by the author more than a reader above all else to be able to continue to write.

Settling down with this thought, I write what interests me, then if people hate it, then they do. I'm not going to bother arguing with them since I have better time in my day. Not everyone will enjoy it, I accept that. I'm happy with what I've written, then I can at least continue putting out my ideas.

6894853 Sometimes we can get carried away with these issues, but I will point out that it's hard for the negative ninnies to nullify a quality story. Low ratings on a newer M & Sex tagged story tends to just be par for the course, with the exception of ones that either use a popular fetish or are otherwise just surprising in a good way to most. More niche fetishes typically get less attention, with an attendant increase in downvotes. Purely for tags, in some cases, I would imagine. I got a handful of downvotes on the prologue of the second part of my main effort and it doesn't even have anything explicit, with most of it action. Just looking up the best rated stories on the site will show some of the same hallmarks, regardless of a story's tags. Particular standouts, like Xenophilia, still have a fair number of downvotes, despite their broad appeal and genuine claim of being top notch.

Either way, it might not make any sane sense for sudden smacks of non-readers downvoting just because they don't like a title or description, but it's the nature of the beast. For the number of people that visit a story, and those that read it, I will wager most won't downvote if it doesn't suit them, assuming a story is given a look at all and is well written.

My brain is bouncing all over the place. Now I have time to read this story at least. I go in expecting fetishes, and still expect to enjoy it for what it is.

Great read!:twilightsmile: Love to see though that there are thumb ups since they actually enjoy it. Also you should write what intreasts you not just others so good moto I'll stay tuned fro all your other work. Keep it up! :rainbowkiss:

There we go. Just finished. That was a very enjoyable read.

Slow buildup with good story and, while is involving some fetish stuff, the sex was not obtrusive at all, as can sometimes be the case in clopfics. I might even say it flowed with the context smoothly enough it almost didn't even feel like the focus. In a sense, it was like getting a window into their lives on a day they just happened to be doing this, so it felt quite natural between them. The whole dom/sub specifically came off very enjoyably as well.

6893855 Every single one of my stories have downvotes even though the majority love them.

Some people don't like the author. Some people don't like the tags (Espevially 2nd person or Human). Some people just feel like downvoting will piss people off.

You will always get downvotes regardless. It is best not to let it get to you. If it is a 10 like to 1 dislike ratio, you are perfectly fine.

6897412 Sir, I believe you should be reading this wonderful story.

6897561 The conversation is fine. I never get any comments on my story, so I'm not really bothered by conversations that may pop-up during this.

Sarah gave a quiet moan as she felt Colgate already start, her teeth nibbling at her erect nipples. She fell back against the couch, her mouth hanging open as she felt the broad, dexterous tongue lick all around her mound. The blanket that was covering her was wrapped in Colgate’s magical aura and thrown across the room. Sarah heard the low whistle that Berry gave as a gasp emanated from Lightning. Sarah moved to wrap Colgate closer to her body, but felt her arms and legs weighed down.
Sarah gave a quiet moan as she felt Colgate already start, her teeth nibbling at her erect nipples. She fell back against the couch, her mouth hanging open as she felt the broad, dexterous tongue lick all around her mound. The blanket that was covering her was wrapped in Colgate’s magical aura and thrown across the room. Sarah heard the low whistle that Berry gave as a gasp emanated from Lightning. Sarah moved to wrap Colgate closer to her body, but felt her arms and legs weighed down.

There seems to be a duplicate paragraph, here. :derpytongue2:

That is all. Equestria is ours.

:derpytongue2::rainbowwild:

6897485 I did read this wonderful story. Whem I said 2nd person I meant it more like "In general people will auto-downvote 2nd person or human"

Nice addition of futa knots too.

6898534 True on the downvote. I was also just messing with you when I said you should read this, like how I'm messing with you now.

Now you put out more horse porn for me to read.

that was very hot. I loved it. Keep up your amazing work my friend.:twilightsmile:

Enjoyable read, the while dragon cocks thing was a nice surprise.

6897412 you forgot one, some people downvote to be a smartass :trollestia:

She finish to finish Lightning quickly, and moved her other hand to the puckered star

lol wat

All unicorns could achieve this, but it wasn’t well known since most ponies never thought about pleasuring the horn. Considering how odd it sounded.

This period should be a comma, and the "c" in considering should be lowercase. Otherwise, the second clause is a faction. Linking to two improves the flow, also.

It throbbed in her grasp, a bead of pre leaking out, which she happily lapped up.

One of two options could be taken to correct this sentence: eliminating the first comma and adding "as" before "a" whilst changing "leaking" to "leaked" is the first option and the second possibility is to simply remove the second comma. The commas, in this case, are meant to show the clause, or phrase, in between them supplements the sentence and, thus, can be removed without altering the sentence. Howbeit, extracting the clause from the sentence would result in changing the reference of the word "which". I recommend taking the first of the two options.

She was certain if she had her ear pressed against the bulging stomach, she would be able to hear all the virile seed swish inside.

A "swish" is the sound of something passing, or going by, (leaving the immediate area). A "slosh" is the sound of disturbed liquid in a confined space, hitting itself and its surroundings. Replace "swish" with "slosh", or any other accurate verb.

By the by, the story was intriguing; you have my favorite!

That is all. Equestria is ours.

:derpytongue2::rainbowwild:

This was nice.

I liked the reaffirming of trust throughout the story; safe words, asides and all that. It's that extra step that makes it all the more enjoyable.

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