"I'm sure he's all black with all red hair, maybe even one of those "secret alicorns" everypony gossips about." YES. Yes he is, alternate universe version of myself!
Ahhh, grammer mistakes from hell!!! Quick kill it with spell check and other typing programs!! If you don't get it well sucks to be you but here is my two cents as of now--- Amsome story, great character development, HORRIBLE grammer (sorry), but great emotional story. I'd give it an A-. :D Here's the best grammer error so far- "You quickly brush your teeth, comb your heart, put on deodorant" How does one... Comb a heart???
WIN!! And first comment! Sorry I had to
I choked laughing at the horrible sex puns....
"I'm sure he's all black with all red hair, maybe even one of those "secret alicorns" everypony gossips about."
YES. Yes he is, alternate universe version of myself!
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I'm totally making fun of alicorn OCs with the Mailer Daemon character.
Happy that you like it.
You must have a thing for showers.
Ahhh, grammer mistakes from hell!!! Quick kill it with spell check and other typing programs!!
If you don't get it well sucks to be you but here is my two cents as of now---
Amsome story, great character development, HORRIBLE grammer (sorry), but great emotional story. I'd give it an A-. :D
Here's the best grammer error so far-
"You quickly brush your teeth, comb your heart, put on deodorant"
How does one... Comb a heart???
2926235 well you start with a small incision just to the right of the sternum....