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interesting looking forward to the next chapters.

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Aug 11th, 2014

a grand idea and I can't wait to see where you'll go with this... but I can't help but wonder what it would've been like if this was more canon (nobody knew of his powers/events but maybe Celestia)

Spike with the abilities of madara uchiha before he died the first time. This should be interesting

Spike having the powers and sharingan of one of the most powerful and hard to kill ninja in the Naruto Universe? Oh, I'm going to enjoy reading this.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2::moustache:

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Yeah. I already have a "madara-esque" line for the confrontation with Nightmare Moon.....

"You sure love to brag about your power....but...can you dance well?" :trixieshiftright:

FYI: Madara refers to battle as "dancing" in the actual series. :pinkiegasp:

4831472 you forgot to add Amaterasu to the list, i dont care how strong dragon fire is the black flames are hotter.:pinkiecrazy:

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According to narutopedia, Amaterasu is not on the list of Madara's jutsu

4833294 its a basic ability of the mangekyo sharingan,they all can use the three techniques

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And Obito never used it as well....plus...how'd they control the fire afterwards in a location with a lot of wood?

4833888 the user can put it out in a blink,just becuse he didnt use it dosent mean he cant it put a massive amount of strain on the eye.

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According to Narutopedia, only Sasuke's left Mangekyu can manipulate and extinguish the Amaterasu....I'm confused. :derpyderp2:

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Every mangyeko sharingan (sp?) does something special that only it and FEW OTHERS can do. Other sharingans could potentially learn Amaterasu but it would not be easy. This is evident in Obito's eyes being the ONLY EYES that change his body through space time and being able to do Kamui. More evidence; Shishui's eye is the only one that has it's effect and no other eyes have ever been able to do what they could.

Madara's abilities are transferred to Spike.
He is going to be a powerful trolling smartass and total badass.
:yay:

"Ha!" Madara coughed out "He'll go blind within a year."

"Which is why I'm removing the blindness from the Mangekyo, but that also prevents it from evolving into the Rin'negan...which is for the best.

Why would Spike go blind in the first place? Wouldn't Spike get the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan since it originally belonged to Madara?

Also, it would be impossible for Spike to get Rinnegan anyway since there are no members of the Senju clan in Equestria. (Are you planning something...?)
If you recall, the Rinnegan requires "The Sage of the Six Paths Vitality", meaning the body of the Senju clan, and "The Sage of the Six Paths Spirit" witch manifested itself as the Uchiha clans Sharingan.

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The only eyes Spike received were Madara's original Mangekyo-not the Eternal Mangekyo. That happens o be the cover image.

Izuna and Madara were the first to unlock the Mangekyo....an then Izuna was Killed In Action, and Madara took his eyes to unlock the Eternal Mangekyo.

As for DNA....well....better safe than sorry.

I hope Madara comes back eventually. Also Amaterasu would be really cool to see.

I'm loving this story! You have earned a mustache! :moustache: and... a TROLL! :trollestia:

Well that escalated quickly.

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You might see him in mind games such as Discord's maze and King Sombra's Door

I have a problem accepting spike using Kamui since that is a power only Obito's eyes have.

That was a pretty good fight. I hope to see him one day reach Madara's level of epicness.

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Actually, while he technically has "Madara's" powers, he is a different person than Madara, hence why his powers are...altered slightly than Madara's (explained next chapter-I was planning on addressing it but thanks for bringing it up. :twilightsmile: )

Since his eyes can't ascend to the "Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan", he only has three "Mangekyo powers"

Right eye: Kamui

Left eye: Amaterasu (replacing great fire destruction)

Both eyes: Susanoo

Besides, personally I find Kamui more useful and....well....other than Susanoo and "infinite tsukiyomi", Madara never used a "Mangekyo power" EXCEPT for Kamui....but I forgot he had stolen an eye of Obito's.....

HOWEVER, to counter that argument.....than how did he get himself out of the Kamui dimension with Obito all but dead and his ORIGINAL eye back?

4837208 cause black zetsu was still possessing obito. How could you forget about that.

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D'oh!

Anyways, in this story, Spike (spoiler alert) had to choose between three powers Madara used in his lifetime-including Kamui. Spike decided that Kamui would be more useful than another genjutsu....as his "Genjutsu: Sharingan" could create more variations among illusions.

Besides, he didn't know that he would be facing multiple villains. Only that a way of teleporting would help him move around and help Twilight and his mom.

If they start to learn how to use chakra then i'm out. The equivalent in magic perhaps but you already mentioned that ponies were not able to utalize chakra as a whole.

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True....I just was thinking about that.

Spike was just thinking out loud. Next chapter they learn that there is no way for them to learn chakra (unless they have a genetic trait for it)

Um, just a suggestion, but would it be a better Idea to make each episode it's own Chapter?

I got some ideas for the Mane Six's weapons.

Twilight: A staff with magic crystals on both ends.

Applejack: Either gaunlets or her laseo.

Rainbow Dash: Sword or a pair of tantos.

Pinkie: Not sure for her, maybe a giant hammer?

Rarity: A raiper or a saber.

Fluttershy:Senbon or a crossbow.

4839546 No problem, I've read some of your other stories, Draconic time Guardian, Dovahkiin, and Pony Blood, Dragon Heart, Body of Metal, and they were really awesome, I especially can't wait for new chapters of Draconic Time Guardian.

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Yeah. Your suggestion for this story will also let me skip some of the "spike-less" episodes

4840000 It also lets you add more detail without making the chapters too long.

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Not bad.....Pinkie and her weapon would certainly be.....unconventional.... :pinkiehappy:

Pinkie: Something unpredictable, like a kusarifundo, kyoketsu-shogei, or meteor hammer.
Rarity: Something refined and elegant, possibly a jian or rapier?
Dash: Something quick, like daggers-maybe ones like Zidane's Mage Mashers?
Applejack: Something to fit her greater relative strength, like a war hammer, battleaxe, or kanabo.
Fluttershy: Something decidedly non-lethal, like a bo, jo, hanbo, or jutte.
Twilight...no idea. I picture her as choosing something that takes quite a bit of practice and precision to master, so maybe some form of sword or archery?

4839790 I see Aj with a cestus personally (ancient fighting gloves with spikes attached)

Question......

How'd a "teen" rated-story end up in the "clopfics" group? :applejackunsure:

I mean...I've never written "clop" before...I'd have to up the story rating....and I would need pointers....but I could potentially have a few clop scenes with those....

Twilight Sparkle: Hook Sword, Chakram, 'and even though it is not a real weapon' Book of Retribution Lexicon
Pinkie Pie: Pickaxe, Meteor Hammer
Applejack: War Hammer, 2-inch Howitzer
Fluttershy: Shield, Shaolin Spade
Rainbow Dash:Hand Claw, Spear
Rarity: Long bow, Tessen, Man Catcher

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Trolls adding stories they don't like (or care about) to groups they don't like, to hurt the author or the group.

4840704 either that or a rose-thorn whip (basically a whip with rose like thorns all over it)

4842653 give Fluttershy the undead killer (it's a whip that harms the undead)

4842994 Do you mean the whip simon uses in the castlevania games?

4843485 no his is the vampire killer whip the difference is that it affects anything allied with darkness while the undead killer targets undeads

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