Sequel to "Momma". Rainbow Dash learns what Motherhood is all about. Series of one-shots.
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FabulousDivaRarity
I'm a Proud ABDL mommy. Writer of padded pony fics, a lot of fics about Shining Armor and his mom, several about Rainbow Dash and her family, and far more mom stories than you can imagine.
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i like it and can you please add more chapters for this sequel
Wow. This was better than the first. I wuvved it!
. Ooh faux paus, there are no people in equestria
Not a bad story by any means, the dialouge still seems a bit stilted. And the use of discord seems a bit too convienent as a plot device, slow down, take some time to develop the story instead of cramming it all in one chapter.
Writing is hard, keep at it.
Seams Rushed, Love it although!
/10
Though I hate the idea of scoots being unable to fly but this was indeed a good story
4727340 I'm working on it right now!
4732502 ok
This chapter is good but I wouldn't mind seeing an alternative ending were dash for some reason decides to stay at the wonderbolt training
I loved Rainbow going Mama Bear on Discord, the fact she actually made him nervous was great. I do wish it wasn't a matter of "if you brought her in a few months ago..." To have fixed Scootaloo's wings, with such a short gap it still seems there should be a way to help her fly with her mom.
Pretty good so far. Maybe in a future chapter Dash witnesses Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon picking on Scoots and the rest of the CMC and unleashes Tartuarus upon thee.
What if they found a wing surgeon to help Scootaloo's wings?
And that folks is why Rainbow is the Element of Loyalty. Good show of being a mom.
4739706 oh man I would pay to see that!!!!
Don't forget the family pet.
Glad you like me idea. Hopefully Dashie could pummel 'em so bad they cease to exist, so we don't have to put up with them anymore
Pretty good. Keep up the good work.
Am I the only guy who thinks Filthy Rich is probably one of the nicest stallions in Ponyville? My interpretation of Diamond Tiara's family is that Filthy is (was) a struggling bussinessman who unwittingly married a bitchy gold digger who ran off with some of his money after Diamond was born. And with Filthy focussing on his business in order for him to feed what remained of his family, Diamond was slowly influenced by the snobs of Canterlot and eventually Ponyville, leading to the spoiled brat we have today. Eventually Filthy remarried and he and his wife are working on improving Diamond's behavoir. Anyone agree?
4752735 That's the most brilliant analysis of Filthy Rich and Diamond Tiara I have ever heard! Well done!
Why thank you! I appreciate that!
Maybe I should write a fanfic with that idea in mind. It'll be in Filthy's perspective, showing how he responds to DT's evildoing. Any thoughts on who his wife should be? I was thinking somepony like Octavia (as much as I ship Vinyl/Octy, I have to make sacrifices for the sake of the story), who is a refined, upper class pony, but also isn't a snob to everyone. Maybe I could fit in Vinyl somewhere, but thats for later. See ya!
yay scootaloo can finally fly with her wings in this sequel i am happy for her great job on with this chapter i really like it
Now that she can fly, there's another obstacle she must go through: love
BTW - Does Scootaloo have a crush on Rumble?
4761275 I never really thought of her and rumble together... Now that I have, it doesn't sound too bad. Maybe that will be a future chapter.
4740272 Or maybe it's her scooter? That's my theory.
I will not take my words back, i mean that i like the story, but it was a bit weird in which way they were able to beat Discord, because i know that he probably just could free himself and he don´t give in that easy.
And the thing with Luna it just looked like she just flew from Canterlot to Ponyville with the sudden urge to scream at her about scootaloo. I mean was it a dream? or was it the real world? If it was the real world then it maked no sense that Luna suddenly knew what happened with Schootaloo and why Rainbow was so sad.
I like it
but maybe you want to hear it, only this way you could make something against these points, if you see it the same way after i said it.
PS: I can´t really explain myself in german what one-shots means exactly, but know i think these are just many one chapter storys is this right?
I would like it if you describe a bit more, i don´t want to say it feels rush, but somehow it doesn´t feel right the way they are suddenly in another scene without a warning. To be more exact, i doesn´t know where i should place Luna and the doctor thing, Dream or not a Dream?
As awesome as the rest. Keep up the good work.
ponies eat meat now?
haybacon for you, my friend!!!!
i know it's a mistake and now i'm a grammar nazi(sorry for racistisim)
besides that it's all good in the hood
The story is good, i would maybe prefer more conversation, but it has it´s own charm i think.
4777226 I read somewhere that they eat meat but I hear its bad for them
4752735 to be honest, becase of his name and his appearance in different fanfics, i didn´t liked him for the most of the time.
Here and in the show i can say that he is not the worst stallion arround. He is polite and i don´t saw him doing bad things.
The name.....yeah i know a game where there is a Character with a name (about money) and he is not nice. I like storys with Diamond and Silverspoon when they learned their lesson or somehow start to be reformed.
I like the story, i always things there is something that i have missed there, but it is somehow simple and yeah nice to read.
I honestly tought she would tell her daughter about her fears or that scootaloo see her cry. Well a good chapter, still a bit rushed for my liking but i think it well.....it should just show differents stadiums of her being a mother.
I vote up for the story, but there has to be more in one chapter befor i can take it into my favourites.
I don´t want you to change this story much, but i expected more speaking, and more description of the story, but i can definitly enjoy this the way it is.
Hmmm i like the story, it somehow just feeled like you could still describe more. I don´t mean it bad, and i can´t really say what it is, but there is something i still miss in this story, maybe if you are finish with the story you should make a rewrite and look for thing you maybe could add to the story.
I think i would like it if some moments get to last longer.
So i can´t really see anything bad here i like it, but i think you can get still better.
FabulousDivaRarity are you going to do a one-shot chapter about Rainbow Dash daughter Scootaloo gets her cutie mark in this sequel and i like it a lot it was worth the wait
i am glad that scootaloo now as a father in her life too and i like OC's
I love love love this series! from the word go it grabbed me and held my attention! Please continue writing!!!!
*watches Discord get beaten to a pulp*
Well... That was easy...
i hate this new character. i'm so hoping he becomes a problem in the future so that he get's kicked out.
I really don't trust him
And you've lost it. It was going so well, then bam. Manipulative abuser. Really? The standard relationship plot twist Cliche?
The really sad thing here is that by changing one paragraph in this chapter you could have Night Blues coming across as a stern but caring parent. Obviously you are planning some downfall with him. You have dropped a couple of hints already but really it seems like added drama that isn't really needed.
I was riding the high of feelings, then BAM!, plot twist, narcissism disorder. It's easily been good enough so far for me to see where this goes, so I'm looking forward to more regardless.
Please put Soarin in here I don't know how just find a way
....that guy's an asshole....even if he didn't know Scootaloo's circumstances, he had no right to do that. After all, I'm pretty sure he isn't a Doctor, which RD visited to ask about this.....dammit, now I'm mad. That's strike one on his chart. Strike two means he's a terrible pony. Strike three means he gets a new asshole.
* A comfort/security blanket has nothing to do with your age...I have a stuffed mouse doll that's even older than I am...I had him since I was 5. Mom's tried to get rid of him (yes I know he's not real, it's just force of habit to refer to him as 'him') and everytime I talked her out of it. I sewed him up countless times, and I plan to never lose him. Basically what I'm saying, is if he goes that ONE STEP TOO FAR*, he better get a new orifice.
*i.e. getting rid of her security blanket without her permission