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Warning: spoilers in the comments. Sensitive topic such as bullying, suicide, depression are mentioned please read at your risk,
Scootaloo's daughter, Nova has come home upset and in tears from the constant bullying at school. She finally had enough and decided to have a little talk about it with her mother. It lead to Scoots opening up to her own troubled past as teenager.
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I based this story on this song and some of my own personal experiences.
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Good chapter. Interesting to see where it goes.
4861587 Stick around and you might just find out.
Thanks for the fave btw!
4861597 I shall indeed, and you're very welcome.
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holy mother of all the gods pleases please work on you spelling get an editor do something like no offense but is English your first language? I would offer to help but my grammar sucks balls too but man when I read 'The Cancer' a part of me died I really really want to like this story its an angle you don't see very often. so please don't be angry with me and ignore me but instead try to fix this try to write like you speak or hear other around you talk I am going to follow this story cause I have hope for it and writing a story is something that I myself can not do very well so already you got more talent then me but also have my respect but to see it dare I say crippled by bad grammar is not cool to take a good concept and render it worthless by such simple mistakes is a shame you can do better so ante up and shine dame it
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English is my language but I really have a hard time wth grammar because I have dyslexia. I tried fix I can without an editor cause I was to get better at it.
well good for you but working with an editor i believe would help you become better i think you can only do so much alone we all need others that we can learn from and threw learning you grow and become better at it I did not become better at computer coding buy just doing things on my own but by talking to others who were way better then me and learning from them you can only go so far on your own but by using the pool of knowledge of others who are better and more experienced there is no limit on how far you can go only the amount of effort you are willing to put into it can limit you
4863892 Okay I'll find editor. I just couldn't get anyone this time.
Well this made me cry
like a bitch. my eyeliner is messed up.
4865319 Sorry to hear that
I relate to scoots too because there is too, something wrong with my eye the doctors have done many catscans but they cant figure it out
4866007 That's unfortunate, I wish the best for you.
Lady Brony why is part 2 not showing up every time you update this story
4867821
. It;s fixed now.
I forget to hit publish oops
4867868 ok
4866017
thank you
Interesting chapter.
4872030 Tell me more
This story has potential, but there are numerous grammatical errors.Shame really, many stories on this site are ruined from the writers not paying attention to what they are writing.
, but you get a sad Fluttershy for the grammar 
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I give the idea of this story a moustache
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Thanks but I did find an editor to help me out. I send part 2 and 3 to him.
Pull a plot twist and do none of the above. Just have them ignore one another.
Poor Nova, I really hope Cara and Ruby dont pick on her. And I really hope Crimson doesnt try anything on her…I don't trust him one bit >:(
4880243 I'll see what I can come with it.
4880265 Okay. Why don't you trust Crimson?
4880327 Its obvious that he's just taking of Nova and he doesnt actually like her
4880478 We have to see about that. You might want to stick around to find out!
4880557 I will stick around, whens the next chapter?
4880591 I haven't stated it yet but maybe in a week or so. But I'm to see the story is a hit and you want more..
4880603 ok
Fight.
Are you sure? Don't you think thats a bit cliché?
It should probably be punished. But other then that, good story so far.
4905875 Thanks for the pointer
AWWE SHORT CHAPTER :(. I bet Cara will be a huge bitch to Nova and Crimson would join in with her
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but this is a tiny preview the whole chapter will be out soon.
That might be the case
4949449 ok But I still dont trust Crimson
4949800 Okay that's your opinion.
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I'm going to have to try and redeem him somehow. Before the damage is done.
Can't wait for the next chapter
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Good to know!
I agree with Rose, this is pretty good.
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Thanks
You did a great job editing>
That's it?
4983688 It's a teaser not the whole chapter. Hence the title "sneak peak" smart one.
4983707 Oh…I didnt see that. I apologize
4983712 I see
4983676 I should change that.
4983728
I just noticed you're that person who wrote the comedy story about Dash failing a class. The one that turned into a weird clusterfuck of bullying, lies, and inappropriately placed drama.
4983745 Yes
That's me.
I wasn't sure to end it so I got lazy and I wanted to move on so I gave up part way. Not my best idea.
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I faved it for a while because it would have been fun if it had been done competently. But it seemed to be suck between being a bunch of off-center jokes and hamfisted angst.
Oh well.