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I make fanfics and stuff. :) I'm also a bit random.

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Rainbow Dash has always thought highly of having friends, and never leaving them behind. However, when someone comes forward and confesses a deeper set of feelings for the athletic pegasus, she has no idea of how to react.

(Cover art drawn by me.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 23 )

now where are my diabetus pills? aniway i liked this! the confession time was a little akward :heart:

i dont know about this... it seems that rd is about to buy an used car rather than being in love whit soarin :twilightoops: im out sorry :applecry:

Awwwww, I'm not one to know this kind of stuff, but this fic is AMAZING!

That was great. Loved the read. 10/10 for you sir:rainbowdetermined2:

Nice story this can move some peoples hearts, your AMAZING! :pinkiehappy:

very good story but im reading this at 1:30 in the morning can you explane everything to me in a really short version :twilightsmile::twilightblush:

Took me 5 hours to read the whole thing from 1:30 to 5:45 am
Totally worth it:rainbowkiss:

"Fine," Rainbow muttered. "I just don't take too kindly to being called a freak; it's right up there with that…other nickname I got stuck with."

Me too. xD

Skyward Strike

Someone's been playing Skyward Sword.

After producing a new cloud, she tested and adjusted it as needed, and flopped down on the plush white surface.

How does one produce a new cloud?

I have that nagging fear

someone else is pulling at the strings
Something terrible is going down
Through the entire town
somethingblablawords
I can't sit idly, no I can't move at all
I curse the name, the one behind it all
DISCORD- ok lemme stop now. xD

“She has such a way with the little ones,” one mare said.
“They act more like mother and daughter than anything,” a stallion noted, which brought tears to Rainbow Dash’s eyes.
“That’s a nice thing to say,” she replied as she and Scootaloo passed him by.
“That filly’s something else with that scooter,” another stallion quipped, prompting Scootaloo to blush in response.
“Look at who her role model is,” a nearby mare added, prompting a blush from Rainbow Dash.

Ponyville Compliments Day! :D

Alrightyyy
A little rushed, not gonna lie. But it is acceptable.
It seems like you forgot to turn of Italic too. I give you the advice to do that, so you don't confuse readers.

Good story. Enjoying it so far. Will read the rest and hope for the best. :twilightsmile:

I have to ask him how he feels about kids, Rainbow thought. That'll be one of the first things we discuss when he gets here.

Oh my god... so sorry but....
ONE DAY AFTER FIGURING OUT YOUR FEELINGS FOR SOMEONE IS RIDICOULESSLY EARLY FOR ANYONE IN THEIR RIGHT MIND TO THINK ABOUT KIDS.

Also, it's very contadicting towards Rainbow's character.

Sorry but... it's...
Cringy...

Nice story. I think you put a lot of effort into it. A bit less action than I would have preferred. Good grammar. Great job with writing a story.

Skyward Strike

I see you have played the 24 year anniversary Zelda game, one of the best too.

Part of me wants something to happen to scootaloo's parents so dash can adopt her. Another part of me says that's a Horrible thing. I'm so torn!:pinkiecrazy:

5150333

I'm howling at the moon,
And sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon,
DISCORD!
What ever did we do to make you take our world awaaaaaaaaaaaaaay?

5150333
somethingblablawords= wreaking anarchy and all it brings

"How can I dry myself when there's a seemingly-infinite supply of water over my head?" Soarin mused.

Answer: You MOVE and you FLY, perhaps!?:rainbowlaugh:

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