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Sapphire Rose 12


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Soarin had never noticed Rainbow Dash this way until she came to check on him after an intense crash. Now, he can't stop thinking about her. He finds out the Grand Galloping Gala is coming up and enlists his friends to get her to go to the Gala with him. It's not as hard as he thought...

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GOOD JOB SOARIN!! Just make sure you don't say something like this again:

What are your best interests to keep at heart?"

*facepalms* :facehoof:

PURRFECT!!!! LOVE IT!!! :rainbowkiss:

But I burst out laughing at this part:

"Oh, and Soarin?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Yes?"

"Next time, try not to hold me so tight."

PFFFFFT!!!! *starts laughing again*

#EMBARSSING!!!!

LOVE IS THE BEST DISEASE ANYONE CAN GET! PEOPLE WANT THIS DISEASE! Good job, Soarin! :raritywink:

SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEQLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :trollestia: :pinkiehappy:

PLEASE. I NEED A SEQUEL TO COMPLETE MY LIFE. :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowkiss:

Id suggest adding a sequel. Especially when this ended so abruptly.

You nailed their personalities! You freaking nailed it!:raritystarry:

Get Rainbow to cling onto anypony in fright, much less Soarin, ha yeah that'll really work.:rainbowlaugh:

I knew Rainbow the Awesome didn't hold onto dudes and scream like a filly. :rainbowlaugh:Seriously though, Soarin really should've known better...:rainbowhuh:

But I'm happy he didn't cuz it's way funnier that he's ignorant!:trollestia:

Please God say Yes!!!!!! But when there were actually rocks??:rainbowlaugh: you my friend get an awesome follow once I'm done here!:pinkiehappy:

Nah, it's mushy but cool. XD

And now bro....:pinkiecrazy: mwa hahahaha!

You get a like.:pinkiesmile:

"There are four trials in this process," Orange Breeze said.
"Trial one," Dust Storm said. "Talking to her. Just getting to know her and her best interests to keep at heart."
"Trial two," Cloud Blaze said. "A trick to lure her in. Something that will trick her into getting her closer to you... but how?"
"I overheard Rainbow Dash in a conversation with her friends earlier," Dust Storm said. "They'll be going to the fair this Thursday. They'll all be riding the new roller coaster: Mountain of Doom. Maybe, you can grab a seat next to her on the coaster and get her wrapping her arms around you."
"Great idea! Let's do it!" Soarin agreed.
"Trial three," Orange Breeze said. "Do something nice for her. You know, give the mare a compliment on her speed or help her carry her saddlebags."
"And trial four is to ask her to the Gala?" Soarin guessed.
His friends nodded.
Soarin gulped. "I don't know if I can do this."
"No worries," Orange Breeze said. "We'll be there to help you every step of the way."

Is there any reference to the comic My little pony: Friendship is magic Issue#11? When Shinning Armor is talking with his friends?

Comment posted by Sapphire Rose 12 deleted Oct 28th, 2016

7647077 (Narrator Voice from Spongebob) One week later.... Sapphire Rose responds to the comment Midday Giggle made.

(Stops the Narrator Voice) So sorry I missed you! I just read the comic a few days ago and I see the similarities, but this was not my intent. It was purely coincidental. :pinkiesmile:

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Don't worry, it's okey :raritywink: I just wanted to know, since I read the comics sometimes when I read this I was like "Wait, what the hell?" I wasn't able to hold myself from asking.

Don't take thier advice. My advice "Be yourself"

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I love you avatar. NATSU!!!! FAIRY TAIL!!!

But, as much as the crash pains ached, he couldn't help wonder what Rainbow Dash was doing.

Turning you into a lovesick puppy!:raritywink:

Soarin agreed. Rainbow Dash holding onto him did sound like an amazing thought.

Rainbow wouldn't do that! Right?








Golly! I hope she does!:pinkiehappy:

"Next time, try not to hold me so tight."

wut. You chicken!

The Grand Galloping Gala!!!:yay:


*High pitched filly voice*

"He's got a disease," Cloud Blaze joked. "It's called love."

Oh! No! Is it contagious! Stay away!

Soarin, you did great!! But RD will NEVER cling to you or anyone else, sorry man!!

I think soarin is the pony who's going to cling on rainbow dash

Rainbow Dash was walking past. "Hey there, guys!" she said in her normal voice. She caught sight of Soarin and her voice immediately dropped a few octaves, making it sound a little flirty. "Hey, Soarin."

I'M DEAD AHAHAHAHHAGAGAG

*takes a breath after laughing hysterically for a few minutes straight* That *coughs out a laugh* was *snickers* BRILLIANT! :rainbowlaugh:

If it feels like rocks, and it looks like rocks, it's probably... ROCKS :rainbowlaugh:

:pinkiehappy: You should have Soarin, Dust Storm, Orange Breeze, and Cloud Blaze meet Shining Armor and his friends 8-Bit, Gaffer, and Poindexter (they're in the comic Neigh Anything). It'd be an awesome nerd-fic (and I mean that as a compliment)!

If I were Rainbow, I would have politely declined.
If I were me, I’ve read a lot of these kind of fics, that end with the kissy-face happily ever after, so... no way!!!! And I hate dresses and frou-frou nonsense! Sorry to mimic AJ here!

Then, the exact moment that earned him his embarrassing nickname, Clipper, returned. Soarin accidently brushed past a sharp edge on one of the flagpoles. He yelped and began plummeting towards the ground.

:rainbowlaugh: from me and the panel of judges. (The wonderbolts)

That was *snickers* hilarious!!
Clipper has returned.
I will regret this moment for the rest of my life...
Worst flier of the day cleans the WHOLE compound! Get your dusting cap on, Clipper!
You ok? And, *laughing hysterically* that was Rainbow laugh emoji times infinity!!!

"Soarin!" Rainbow Dash cried. "Are you alright?"

The ship is ready to sail.

And, I would say: “Plane S04RD4SH will take off soon. And somecreature please decode that in a pm me for a free follow.”

Aumsum: “I will travel back in time and save him using my AumSum shield!”

Aumsum time narrator: “Oh, Aumsum!”

Soarin looked up to see Rainbow Dash and immediately paused. He was in a daze. Since when did Dash ever look so beautiful?

She doesn’t look beautiful (no offense, Dash). She looks more cool than beautiful, and nopony put her in a dress, especially not green. Blue and magenta are her best dress colours.

(Just my opinion!)

"My guess is that he has a concussion," Rainbow Dash conncluded.

Same. But why don’t you find a time-travel shrinking submarine, put it in his pie, and let him eat it. Then travel to his brain and see what he’s thinking!

Now you’re officially crazy.

No, italicized font! But she could ask for some triangular help (lol, very, very crazy.)

Ok, now I’m calling 911 and Titans tower for the Captain Crazy crown.

"Falling for Rainbow Dash," Spitfire said. "Nice. I'm not even gonna make you clean the compound."

Aaaaaahh!!!!! My predictions were untrue! Spits isn’t making ya clean the compound!!!! I’d make him do that for a year if I were Spitfire!!! (What? in my previous comment, italicised font me said that I’m crazy, and it’s TRUE!!! :raritydespair:

"I don't have a concussion!" Soarin exclaimed, angrily.

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"What?!" Soarin felt his cheeks getting burning hot.

Yeah, right. But, nice tomato costume btw!

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Mmhmm, you’re right, but let’s ask Dash herself.

Hey, Dash!!
What is it, Geo, I was napping!
Would you cling onto Soarin or anyone else?
No way, José! I’m WAAAAYYY too awesome to be clingy. Why do ya wanna know that?
Nothing, and will S04RD4SH ever take flight?
I donno whatcha talking about, but it has my initials, so it must be related to me somehow... and obviously I can fly!! The S04 and the 4SH part doesn’t make sense. I’ll ask Twilight.
Twilight! I need help with a fanpony here!

What’s wrong? Too much pics? Too annoying?
No, not at all. She wants me to decode ‘S04RD4SH’. Whatever that means. And all I know is that it’s related to me and flying. And, can you decode it with your egghead thing?
Ok, and I’m not an egghead. Bull Terriers are eggheads, literally!


The ‘D4SH’ stands for Dash, you, and the ‘S04’ must be Soa, must be your first name, and the R for Rainbow.
Ok, now I’m confused. Hey fanpony! Mind telling us the real meaning behind Soa R. Dash?
*laughs, facepalms* Its actually Soardash. One word made of 2 names, yours, and one more. And no hints from Twily.
I have no time to figure out who ‘Soar’ is, I’ve missed 10 minutes of important being shot by a captain-of-wonderbolts-inator in a dream. So see ya later, gud night *sleeps on cloud*

Typical RD. And sorry for the mini story!

Soarin swallowed a nervous stream of saliva. "I can't do this! I've never ridden a roller coaster in my life!"

:facehoof: :rainbowlaugh: Seriously?

Status update:
Plan three: reversed.
Me: laughing
Soarin: embarrased
Rainbow Dash: freaked out and 80% enjoying the ride. It would’ve been 20% cooler if Soar wasn’t clinging onto her for dear life.

"Oh, the dramatic coincidences of life," Soarin said.

:rainbowlaugh: you forgot to add the comedy tag

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