Rainbow Dash has been a little out of it. Sure, it may be a tough week,but she doesnāt even seem to enjoying herself when sheās playing soccer. Thereās something bothering her, and Soarin is going to figure it out and help her.
Equestria girls universe.
(first story published here! enjoy! Cover art my me!)
Awwwww this is so cute! SoarinDash forever!
(Not as good as FlutterCord but best Rainbow Dash ship anyway)
This needs a sequel. The only flaw I saw was that once you finish a sentece, you should put more space so it can't be very close to the other sentence. Like this:
This was seriously adorable, Ari. You might not want to admit it, but you're a very talented writer. I was squealing the entire time I read it! Nice work!
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CRYSTAL PLEASE IMMA DIE
AGH thanks so much
7485449 I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!
Oh, I see. I'll remember that
7485165 SOARINDASHHHHH FOREVAHHH
and lmao xD
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Ah, glad you do, thanks!
A'wwww so cute! Great story!
7486630 Thank you!!
7486656 no problem
This was amazing
This was really cute! And relatable! It's easy to get stressed when you think the situation requires you to be perfect.
I loved it! (I want a sequel.
Like how the game goes and/or what happens after...)7488854
woAH WOAH WOAH
First of all, I love your SoarinDash stories so much mhhggmfdsdhf
Second,
You'll just have to find out soo.7488560 Thank you!!!
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WHAT WHAT WHAT
Hahaha! Thank you so much!
But whhyyy?!?!?!?7489418
I STARTED READING THEM LIKE A YEAR AGO FIRST AT LIKE 12 AM AND THEY'RE SO UNIQUE7489432
Haha! That's how I was like when I started reading Calm Wind's stories, they're SO FRICKIN ADDICTING Thank you so much!
7489464 no problem, aND YES SAME
Needs some editing to fix grammatical errors, but pretty sweet overall.
OmG SO CUTE
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Mhm, thought so. I'm not the best at that, but thank you!!
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GaH thanks!
7493008 You're welcome
7496211 omg heyYYYY
and thanks!
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Late reply, but AHH THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Awwwww that was adorable and i love the art too
7519404 Thank you so much!! Ha, you're the first person to talk about the art
>>Arioodle No problem it is really cute though
2 words ITS AWSOME I like and I enjoyed reading it
7524697 AHHH great to hear!!! thank you!
aww that was so cute! I love soarin and Dashie together!!!
7737185 dont we all?
Awww this story was so cute and amazing I LUV IT
Idk why but this made me laugh
Here lies Rosie Nature who died of cuteness overload from SoarinDash
P.S Amazing Work