Lightning Reforged

EStorm of Loyalty
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Lightning Dust finally gets a chance to meet Rainbow Dash's other friends. How will this play out?
Spike
Celestia
Main 6
Lightning Dust
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After a training exercise goes wrong, a certain pegasus contemplates the situation after finding her dreams potentially shattered, and comes to terms with a childhood tragedy in the process. (A one-shot set directly after the events of "Wonderbolt Academy," and told from Lightning Dust's perspective.)
[originally posted to Fanfiction.net on 11/20/2013]

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Crescent-087

Crescent-087 #1 · Feb 4th, 2014 · · ·

Its a bit bland....but its written ok and i don't see many mistakes, so i guess i'll give you a thumbs up...

00RaiserGundam

00RaiserGundam #2 · Aug 11th, 2014 · · ·

There are a few sentences that are clearly missing quotation marks, but other than that, this is a great story!

PonyofEntropy

PonyofEntropy #3 · Apr 19th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Good story. I like it when LD is a better pony.

Pete100

Pete100 #4 · Sep 25th, 2020 · · ·

“Is she one of those strangers you were pining for earlier?” The question was meant to be an insult, but unfortunately for me, it had some adverse effects—namely, a hoof to the face.

I’m fighting back.

Another hoof to the face, and this time, I tasted blood.

I’m killing rainbow if she does that to me.

“Yeah. Now that I know a bit more about you, I’d like to offer you my friendship. I can’t speak for the others, but I am personally willing to give you a second chance.”

F*ck no

“Anytime,” she responds, but she wasn’t finished. Before I can do anything, I find myself wrapped in a tight embrace, courtesy of Rainbow Dash herself. “Anything for a friend,” she adds.

That quick?

Every time I ran off or got myself into some kind of trouble, they made a habit of mentioning him. I was sheltered already, but my brother’s death made it much worse.”

I would have been mad.

Yeah, I completely forgot about that split lip Rainbow gave me before. Remind me never to make her angry; those punches could do some serious damage.

I would make her angry on a daily basis just to see what she does to me.

AvoidingFever17

AvoidingFever17 #5 · January 12th · · ·

“Loyalty.” She says this with pride and conviction; just shows how important this is to her. “Yeah, I never leave my friends hangin’. There’s nothing I wouldn’t do for them.”

Indeed
I've seen her Adventures
ALL of them
From different timelines
From the ones where she was cursed to another form
To many other worlds
She embodies the same virtue i have
Loyalty

AvoidingFever17

AvoidingFever17 #6 · January 12th · · ·

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Wow...
Show some Empathy once in a while will ya?

Pete100

Pete100 #7 · January 12th · · ·

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I can and do.

AvoidingFever17

AvoidingFever17 #8 · January 12th · · ·

11797129
You certainly dont sound like it
Eh im tired im not gonna argue
You're lucky

Pete100

Pete100 #9 · January 12th · · ·

11797130
Sure

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