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Yoni
Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick
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4700647 nice indeed
Awwwwww welcome to the world Muffin!!!
That's freakin adorable.
Thx for the sequel.
I'm noticing a recurring theme in your stories: Nobody has heard of contraception, abortion, or being careful.
Huh...... well look at that. Nice hybrid combo there. Very unique never seen one like this before. Nice story will continue to follow.
Ok, who the fudge made that picture? It is just to damn adorable for me to handle.
I see that condoms don't exist in your headcanon. Doing it unprotected and cumming inside -- what the hell did they think was going to happen? This reminds me of stuff my mom told me they used to make girls read in Catholic school.
Muffin is so adorable (pic in note)
4701661 Nothing? He probably didn't think inter species would work.
4701633 Interspecies reproduction isn't exactly... possible. They probably didn't even consider that it could happen, because logically it can't.
Congratulation, it's a Satyr!
I'm holding out for a 4700816
All the feels, can't wait for the sequel series to take off.
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ill be your hero mr mac
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They're different orders, they should not be able to conceive at all.
Even if Anon went in without protection, came inside, with no contraceptives involved, and Derpy was at peak fertility at the time, conception should be impossible, live birth even more so.
See, between two species in the same genus, it's actually pretty damn easy (ligers, mules). Between two genera in the same family, harder but still doable (pumapards). Between two families? Unheard of. Between two orders is right out!
4701870 That depends really. Tiger and Lions can and do have um kittens i guess you would call them. But ponies and humans no that just silly
. Unless there some kind of magic.
4702385 Until you involve magic (guess where they are and what Derpy is, you get one chance and no possibility of failure), at which point logic, reason and science flies right out of the window, while being on fire, to crash into a million pieces on the merciless ground outside, upon which the pieces are swept away by the wind.
But since Anon is human and Derpy is a pegasus it is doubtful either of them were aware of this. They probably thought it was impossible, too.
So much adorableness, can't survive. *dies*
*comes back* That was a rush.
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They're in Equestria. You know where everything is MAGIC. Anything is possible there.
TOOOOOO MUUUUUCH CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!! *explodes*
Fatality. But in all seriousness, this is an awesome fic, and the only clop that I have ever favorited. Probably because it was so flippin short (that is a good thing) and at the same time well written. Great overall!
4702587 well, if magic WAS involved, where would the magic be? Did Sparkler use a Get-Me-Another-Sister spell? That's where the problem comes in, there was no magic involved, therefore leaving it to logic and reason.
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Am I making a point?
4702470 the world may never know. Well, I mean this is fiction. Speculation is fun, but let's leave that part to Reddit.
Yes. I like this new story.
4703394 \
for as long as I live I will protect you and your virgins
You Are My 4703512
4703192 I'm thinking passive magic, which is within the ponies naturally, not projected magic like spells.
They're basically magical in of themselves. They HAVE to be, given that they routinely break the limits of biology and/or physics without casting any spells. Pegasi in particular are quite blatant about this, what with their ability to walk on clouds, manipulate the weather and last, but certainly not least, being able to fly at all.
Their wing size compared to their body mass is ridiculously small, they literally should not be able to fly. At their apparent size/weight, unless they're filled with helium or something, they'd need wings at least twice the size they got now, possibly three times as large...
TL;DR Ponies are magic, human scientific knowledge doesn't necessarily apply.
Well... The story is good. The picture at the end... Kind of creepy...
4703646 Creepy? *check picture for myself* It's adorable
4702470 Lions and Tigers can because they're both Feline species, just like Horses and Donkeys can because they're both equine.
4703668 Umm... Checks again for himself. Nope, still creepy.
4703714 You're right on that regard, but there're more factors beside that. In order for different species to be able to breed, they must be closely related - usually within the same genus, and at least within the same family. Donkeys and horses both belong to the family Equidae and genus Equus.
It also matters how many chromosomes each species has and if they had a recent ancestors.
4703836 I know, but I was trying to keep my explanation simplified.
4703581 huh. I guess their inherent magic could be a part of it, yes. But what magic enables cross-breeding? I would like to see THAT ability on their inherent magical power list. Now, you could try to make the argument of gryphons, so technically you would be correct. Let me say this, however. A power that allows cross-breeding between dimensions is not a magic power that even alicorns have.
4703955 I was thinking that it isn't a specific magical power, but rather the reality-warping aspect of magic itself. It might even be that it isn't an ability inherent to any particular species, but rather it's an aspect of the very reality they live in. The laws of nature are pretty damn flexible in Equestria, after all.
Magic is completely impossible in our world, but not in theirs... So yeah, I'm guessing just about anything could be possible. As you mentioned, they have Gryphons. And Manticores. And Cockatrices. They're all hybrid creatures, so hybrids are not without precedent.
What exactly spawned them and how, originally, I haven't got the slightest idea. Maybe Discord did it for the lulz.
Opinion, not fact. Though you're probably right. It'd be a pretty unusual magic power to have.
When it comes down to it, I'm trying to explain freaking magic, and no one knows how that shit works so I'm basically pulling theories out of my ass.
4704055 let's leave it to the canon to clarify. Agreed?
4704070 Eh. Might as well.
4701261 Finding you in the comments of a story is like playing where's Waldo..
I couldn't help but D'aww at the end. Great name choice.
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So not from the same species but from the same genus.
MUFFINZ!!
Despite my dislike of blank slate OCs(which are primarily used because it allows the reader to put themselves in the blank slate's position which ANY writer knows this is a sure fire way to lure in a ton of readers. aka: lazy method of writing a character.) I attempted to shove those prejudices aside and give this story a shot.
The following displays my reaction upon(somehow) managing to finish the chapter without tearing my eyes out:
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This entire chapter made me facepalm so many times I think I have an imprint of my palm on my head!
Did you even bother to put ANY effort at all into writing this? No, I'm not trying to flame you, I'm being dead freaking honest.
This ENTIRE chapter has no plot, 90% of it consists of sex, and to make matters even more painful, he knocks up Derpy? I read and reread these parts, trying to make sure I didn't overlook a major plotpoint which would make it possible for a human being to knock up a mare and found NOTHING.
Where in the dark reaches of your reality could make this even possible?
*sighs* But I digress, grammar and spelling wise, this story was nearly flawless.
On that note, I will say that the upside to reading this has gotten rid of any potential worry that my prejudices for these kinds of stories were misplaced.
Delete this comment if you wish(You most likely will) but you can do so much better than this, I can see the potential in your writing skill. Don't waste it on a style of fanfiction you know will land you high view count and favs, put real effort into a story.
None of my stories have ever been 2nd person and 4 of them have hit the featured box. One of which hit it over and over after leaving it for 3 days strait.
Make of that what you will.
4705427 Well then... ouch. I'm pretty sure that if the human race could ever weaponize verbal onslaught, then yours would probably leave my unrecognizable body in different parts of all discovered and undiscovered dimensions, needless to say, I can think of a few ways to soften the blow.
That being said, I appreciate your honesty (as brutal as it may seems). It's good to know that you enjoy (I think) my other stories and that you don't outright hate me after reading only one.
And don't you worry. I usually take those kind of comments with stride. Usually it's just because the sender is frustrated over a repeating mistake on my part, though there are a few who're just plain cruel, not you though.
I will not delete your comment. I'd like to think of myself as one who's not censoring someone over an opinion, even if it's unjustified or cruel. I'd like to thank you, for still having faith in me
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I'm brutally honest but fair when I type out a review. After all, if I shower you with "OMG THIS IS AWESOME!" or "OMG! THIS IS HORRIBLE!" and don't provide any meaningful input, how are you going to improve as a writer?
I've been writing for 10+ years now and let me tell you, my grammar and spelling STILL is bad. No where even close as to as bad as it was when I wrote my first story mind you but still, at the very least, most of my grammar and spelling mistakes are overlooked by my readers because they love my stories.
You should see my VERY FIRST work of fiction, I look back on it and want to do this to my monitor:
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(minus the smile of course)
I haven't read any of your other stories yet but I just might though granted, a lot of them look like 2nd person stories which makes me wanna run screaming.
I would suggest reading others fanfiction on this site, not only to research the different methods to writing a good plotline but also to get a better understanding on how to write 3rd person fanfiction. Heck, you could even do a first person fanfic based on what I've seen but you need to improve on being able to create a stable plotline first.
If you don't mind the shameless self plug, Here's a link to the fic I spoke of earlier that made it into the featured box everyday for three days in a row after leaving it: Some Secrets are better left unold
You don't have to read it but if you do, hopefully it will give you a better understanding of what I've been saying.
If you do read it, please comment on the chapters if you would and don't be afraid to be as brutally honest as I have with you but don't flame me either or I WILL delete your comment.
Don't look at me like that!
Lets see you deal with flamers for 5+ years and the sight of a flame not making your blood boil!
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Dude, please don't listen to this guy. He has no idea what he's talking about.
Someone clearly doesn't know what an Anon in Equestria story is, despite you saying that is, indeed, an AiE story.
You mean... he wrote an actual slice of life?! Gasp!
Not to bash you or anything, but from reading the first several paragraphs, I saw many
obvious mistakes. Here's just one:
"she" should be capitalized since it's the start of a new sentence and dialogue has ended. I wouldn't take grammar advice from some who can't spell "straight" correctly.
Four of the five stories he has had featured are shipping, and the other is a TG story, so he has no right to tell you not to "take the easy route" to the featured box.
That second post of his seems more like blatant self promotion.
Other then the grammatical mistakes it was pretty awesome and enjoyable. The picture was real damn cute as well man, good job. By the way, does she have arms or wings? I couldn't tell by the picture or the story, I'm just a bit confuzzled. I also agree with the previous statement of MUFFINZ!
4706619 She has arms as well as wings
4707114 Ok, thanks for the clarification
SO FUCKING CUTE !!!