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Yoni


Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick

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Flurry Heart, the young child of Cadance and Shining Armor, ran away from the castle. The curious princess heard about a new species known as 'humans' and decided to see one from up close.

Little does the young princess know, meeting a human will be far easier than it seems.


Just a little something that popped into my head a while back. I might make another chapter or a sequel, depending on how well this story will turn out.

Also, the cover art is a bit misleading, the anthro ponies have hands with fingers and such, but there aren't a whole lot of Flurry Heart's anthro pics (that are no erotic), thus I chose this pic

Huge shout out to Dying For Riley who edited this story, I'm so sorry I didn't included your name earlier, you are awesome and you should feel awesome!!!

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Comments ( 34 )

7065525 Either a sequel or another chapter, still not sure though

My sharpened shipping senses detect a possible romance in the future.

My question, is how important is Aaron's father? Like what was he there for?

7066241 he's not that important to the story but he is there to set the ending

Reception? Sorry to say mate, but you better start writing up the next chapter. This is bound to blow up with likes and comments any second now. I know I friggin adored this thing, those two just are too damned cute together.

I loved this stories, as well as most of your other human stories. I would love to see you add more to this story.

That was so damn adorable I think you gave me cancer, adorable cancer in ma feels :applecry:

Nice sweet story. Good as a one shot but I would definitely love to see more. :twilightblush:

I would LOVE to hit the like button, but seeing as I am on an alternate account to my own, I cannot vote...sorry...just imagine adding one to whatever the count is for upvotes as my vote :D

we were so worried about!" Princess Cadance said

Missing a word

Estuvo interesante porfa continúe

Y por que varias personas hablan en español , es un chiste o algo ?
Nah , i tope you continue this story , since we can al agree it has been well received

Most adorkably sweet! Have a thumb up, Yoni :pinkiehappy:

Mate when is the sequel coming??? This is great!

7626483 I really need to start writing again, haven't I:twilightblush:
The sequel is exactly 4939 words as of now and still growing

7638967 whats the name of the sequel so we can look out for it?

7761411 It was never released, perhaps in the distant future I might finish it

Cadance exchanged looks between Flurry Heart and Aaron, her eyes slowly drifting towards the carvings on the tree bark. A small smile tugged at Cadance's lips as she stood up and faced the only adult human in the group.

Oh gosh, the princess of shipping is here! Even children cannot escape her! Run, flee!

"Aaron!" Flurry Heart called. "Aaaaaaron!"

Reading this in Jon's voice. "I looove you!"

What is this?!

Good read, looking forward to more.

Nice 1-shot, but I'm against HiEs that have more than one human o.c. Sorry

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No need to apologize. Your taste in fanfics is your business only

Too cute and sweet, i..i--*dies* :twilightsmile:

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Nooooo, don't die. I don't want to go to jail

Comment posted by MarkSpectrum deleted Dec 7th, 2021
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