Since the first day they met, Sweetie Belle and Button Mash knew that causing their relationship to flourish can benefit both of them in the long run. The only problem is, they need help on doing so, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo volunteer to help their fellow Crusader experience the start of something new, romance.
That is until someone returns from Manehattan to pay them a visit.
Cover art owned by FlashQuatsch
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and their characters are property of Hasbro and Lauren Faust. ©
Featured in the Popular Stories on July 5th, 2014.
Chapters (4)
I like it almost as much as I like Jackie Chan's singing.
Seriously, listen to his stuff. Its amazing. Especially listen to "Endless Love" and "I'll Make A Man Out of You"!
4644150 Uh, thanks?
4644155 yw.
Waz up Thunder!
Anyway, I am kinda on par with the story. Not bad, but not good. Just meh???
(Maybe because I am not into romance / clopfics
)
Anyway, the quickly setup conflict between Sweetie Bell and Button Mash and the lack of detail on the concerns / outline of the plans are what I think the weak points are in the first chapter.
Otherwise, I can't say anything else except lets see where this goes.
Good Luck mate!
4644188 Nothing much and thanks! I'll be sure to add more detail to the conflict in the next chapter.
It's got good buildup, solid planning, mainly on AB's part.. But why can't Button know? If Sweetie knows, then something can go wrong: she predicts everything before it happens and spoils it. Button should know.
Yeah, I should know!
Not now, Button. Leave it to me. So ya.
4644264 They want to keep as a secret for now. In the next chapter, you're going to see how we move into the second step. Also, thank you!
4644276 welcome: ButtonBelle is best.
4644276 and the most ironic thing: my most recent follower is Sweetie-Belle... And then look at my name.. XD
4644298 Oh the irony.
4644302 what can I say: best pony gets best ship. #ButtonBelleBest
4644305 Yeah.
It's supposed to be possibly not possible, but other than that good chapter, can't wait to see what happens when babs gets there.
Woah. I already had this in my read later list, when I saw it in the top of the popular stories list.
......Sweet. 
4644894 Wow, I'm pretty surprised that I made it!
4644750 Thanks for pointing out the mistake, I'll be sure to fix it.
Nice so far......
4645610 Glad you like it so far.
4645611
Yep, when will tthe next up date be out?
4645738 In a matter of moments, adding the finishing touches.
4645739
Yay!
4645739
Yay!
4645746 So, be ready!
4645750
I will!
4645829 Good.
4645831
But I don't know if I'll be able to concentrate engough to read it, since tomorrow is a BIG DAY for me!
4645864 It is, how so?
4645874
I'm gettign comfermated tomorrow! Over here it's quite a big deal!
4645985 Awesome!
4645991
I know! SO EXCITED! are you comfermated?
4646015 Yeah I sure am.
Yay! A new chapter!
4646036 Enjoy!
4646017
Yay!
Cathlic or Protestantic? (don't know if both have comfermation, but anyway...)
4646038
Sure did!
4646058 Catholic.
4646060 Glad you enjoyed it!
4646068
Oh, intresting. I'm protestantic. Sweden is originally a protestantic christan country, but, because of immigration (that's quite big) and such, almost all religions is represented here.
4646069
yep!
4646077 Interesting, we should probably discuss this on something else. Don't want to clog up the comments.
4646078 Good!
Ignition is a go, reapeat.
4646142 I'll keep the good stuff coming!
4646089
PM me. We can cobtinue the conversation there.
4646341 Okay.
4646351
Good
*doesn't read.... yet...*
THIS STORY NEEDS MORE THRACKERZOD!!!
4646596 If only I knew who that was.
But if you are going to read the story, enjoy the first two chapters. Ignore the third one, I have yet to write it. 
In all honesty, this story isn't that great. Not horrible, but not... Well, great. It's... meh.
First off, you still need to work on your pacing there. It especially shows in Chapter 2 when Applebloom is waking up in the morning and delivering the love letter... at night..
Second, you really need to be a little more descriptive about how Sweetie likes Button. It looks as if they were planning to take him out to that fast food joint in "Twilight time" instead of Planning to create a romantic dinner for the two of them. Also, that summary in the beginning doesn't really help. To quote the Nostalgia critic in his review of 'After Earth', "Show don't tell; or at least have what you're showing match up with what you're telling.". What does Sweetie Belle feel when she's around him? How long has she been in love with him? How is she feeling about this plan her friends are coming up with? Is she okay with it, is she not? You know stuff like that.
Third, in the author's note on Chapter 1, yeah, don't do that. We're not watching anime, we're reading your story. Hell, I even hate it when animes do that.
In conclusion, It's not horrible; it just needs a little fixing, that's all.
4646778 My mistake, I'll be sure to get rid of this problem in the next chapter. Thank you though.