This story is a sequel to Knock-Out's Annoyance, Blueblood's Bad Day
Grimlock, the leader of the Dinobots was almost certainly not the kind of Transformer you'd consider a father kind of bot. Yet, somehow he's become exactly that for a certain trio of fillies. Primus only knows what the rest of the Ark thinks of all this. Pyro certainly finds it funny. Prowl just can't believe it while Babs thinks it's awesome to have her cousin have a T-Rex for a father and Ms Cheerilee is very, very concerned.
Also starring: Prowl, Pyro, Wheeljack and the Dinobots along with, Spitfire, Applejack, Rainbow and Starscream, along with Starlight Glimmer and Rampage.
Takes place in the same universe as "Knock-Out's Annoyance, Blueblood's Bad Day" and "Outflown". Reading them is not required. Hasbro owns Transformers. ...Yeah, it's official. My mind is... odd to say the least. I regret nothing.
(Gore tag added because of Chapter Seven)
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Your title making is goals
7231846 Actually, the title itself is part of the joke as it relates to Grimlock's style of speaking.
7231846 Okay, changed it to something with proper grammer.
7231911 But the old title was so good
7231916 Yeah, but I've got two dislikes and no likes so I figured that was the reason and that some people just didn't get the joke.
7231975 Yep, I imagine that was pretty much along the lines of what Prowl was thinking and why he fainted.
7231976 was going to do the jon tron video but i cant use is at the moment
7231976 check out my story the reviews on that are soooooooooo divided is not even funny click here for it
7232001 Hey, just asking but how do you link one specific word to another page? I've never been able to figure out how you do that, so I just always put the URL of whatever I want to link to.
7232007 you select the word by draging over it then clicking the little chain icon on the toolbar it should be next to the picture icon then you get the url for the place you want to link to and copy and paste
7232014 Ah, thanks.
7232015 no problem it took me a while to figure that out actually
7232022 Makes you wish there was a manual or something or at least for a "For Dummies" guide. Well, there is the FAQ I believe but I don't think it covered this.
7232028 i also wish that they would make it to were you can like specific chapters and dislike others
But Grimlock is a father in G1 season three he build the Techobots so he have six sons.
7232289 Who says they've been built yet in this universal stream?
7232353 No one said it's your story, I'm just saying that Grimlock is a father already but your story is a fusion of G1, Prime and W/F (War & Fell) Cybertron so Techobots may never be build at all.
So much awesomeness in this story!!!
7232549 I understand. Speaking of which, did you know they're getting Generations Combiner Wars toys?
7232934 Huh, you think so? I really didn't think my action scenes were that good... Hope I can live up to your expectations with later chapters!
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I guess you notice I'm a Transformers fan myself! Except I lean a bit towards the Japanese side when it comes to G1. Like my Dai Atlas pic? He's from the Japanese 1990 Transformers Zone!
7233000 Yes I saw them at www.toywz.com, The Combiner Wars is my less favs saga but I do the first Femme Combiner team.
You could have the CMC made autobot versions of the Constructicons (AKA the Builtbots) and the Combaticons, if you want autobot versions of Blitzwing and Astrotrain.
7233220 Actually, I did see Zone and Dai Atlas was pretty cool. Personaly, I prefer Star Saber but that's just me.
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Yeah, Star Saber is one of the coolest G1 Transformers ever, along with a few other classics. Like*cough*Warpath*cough*
The Cutie Mark Crusaders shall conquer the world
Loving it!!!
funny you mention Star Saber
because in Transformers Victory he has Grimlock's job in this fic
but only one human
7240779 You know now that you mention it, that is pretty funny.
I loved this chapter! Believe it or not I have a gigaton of love for Grimlock and his band of knuckleheads. And there is truth to his words he truly is the king! And on another note you've kept everyone in character!
Ah Rarity's whining. Truly the greatest weapon in her arsenal. I almost feel bad for starscream.
"Most. Embarrassing. Parents. Ever."
Haha, got that right.
Will that Starscream vs Rainbow Dash Death Battle be referenced in this story?
7270877 You know, I never thought about that but I'll see what I can do if I ever have the two in a scene together.
Admittedly it was extremely funny. Also Grimlock has plenty of reason to fear rarity. Her whining can do a number on ones audio receptors.
I like the Rarity/Grimlock pairing here, gets me thinking of what would happen if the Mane 6 each talked to their individual counterparts:
Twilight = Perceptor
Rainbow Dash = Sideswipe
Fluttershy = Hound
Applejack = Ironhide
Pinkie Pie = ?
I think of Rarity and Grimlock as each other's counterparts, because they both want things to go their way, and get very aggressive when it doesn't.
7273061 I'd imagine Pinkie's counterpart to be Wreck-Gar. Might me because both Cheese (Pinkie's male counterpart) and Wreck-Gar share a voice actor.
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Excellent thought, why didn't I remember that.....
Awesome! Think Ultra Magnus can show up? Love to see him go 1v1 with Rainbow Dash in an argument about being serious.
7284489 Oddly enough, I did think about using Ultra Magnus instead of Optimus in that one chapter.
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Yeah, that might've worked, I'd also love to see him quote his famous one liner:
"I can't deal with that now!"
Awww.....
Five Scootoloos!
7308080 Really? You think it was worth that much? Huh, cool.
Solid work. I'm looking forward to see what happens next.
7315081 Good. I'm trying to decided on the CMC causing chaos in Wheeljack's lab or Scootaloo, Powerglide and Swoop going to a Wonderbolts show only for some cons led by Starscream to attack and the Autobots and the Bolts having to fend them off.
That was some heavy stuff. I always wondered if wheel jack had any endoskeletons in his closet so to speak. I can't wait to see how the airshow pans out!
Poor Wheeljack.
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Glad you guys liked that chapter. Hey, just asking here but do you think I should do a later chapter where Rampage somehow comes back (Immortal spark, you know) and Wheeljack has to face his sins? And Dai Atlas, I know there will be something you like in the next chapter as I plan to have Ultra Magnus make at least one variation of his most famous line and perhaps quote the full line completely at one point.
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Those are both great ideas! I like it!
7335364 That sounds like a good idea.