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  • 3w, 6d
    How Rainbow Rocks will affect The Misadventures of Sunset Shimmers (No Spoilers - Chillax!)

    So I just got done watching Rainbow Rocks, and thought I'd let you all know how it's gonna play into The Misadventures of Sunset Shimmers. Short answer is: it won't.

    Since its reveal I knew I'd have to either incorporate it or not, depending on the world/character building that Hasbro would use to make the movie work. Sadly, the world development they've added is pretty hard to work around what I have planned, unless I make this sorta midway between EQG and RR. Unfortunately, the character development makes this impossible. Characters have been established in RR that were established differently in Misadventures, and Sunset Shimmers character especially, as well as how others act around her, are vastly different to what I've already got down and plan to build further.

    So sadly, Rainbow Rocks will have no influence on The Misadventures of Sunset Shimmers. You'll just have to consider it an AU... of an AU. The comic annual last year that shows Sunset Shimmer's backstory was great and I was easily able to work that into my plans (in fact it made what I already had planned before writing even greater!), but this movie is simply too much of a gamechanger. That said, I do have plans for another story based in the EQG world that I may or may not be able to encorporate RR canon into. That of course will have to wait until I'm feeling better.

    Now as for the movie itself, if you haven't seen it, I recommend it. 8/10. Good solid plot, fun characters, sorta okay villains, didn't end abruptly or outstay its welcome. It was nothing spectacular, but it was a fun watch and I'd certainly buy the DVD to support it. Just... fuck off Flash, okay? It's obvious you're only there to fulfil a 'romantic plot point' qouta -_-

    SPOILER BELOW (okay, so I couldn't resist writing ONE spoiler, but at least I tagged it! ><;; ):

    Only gripe was that Sunset Shimmer essentially became a 'fanfic cliché Trixie', in that she's so overwhelmed by her guilt her whole personality performed a 180. I don't mind characters trying to act more friendly towards others or changing sides, but you can do that without rewritting who they are and why we love them to begin with.

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  • 4w, 6d
    Update, since it's been a while

    Since it's been a while since I've done an update blog, I thought I'd let anypony who actually reads these things know what's happening lately.

    First of, The Misadventures of Sunset Shimmers - as you probably noticed by now if you follow that story, I updated it not too long ago (after a VERY long hiatus). I was hoping to get another chapter out either this week or next, but I've been feeling really unwell lately (what I thought was asthma turned out to be a chest infection and I've been taking some meds for it, which have been making me feel very out of it). I'll continue the next chapter as soon as I'm feeling better, but until then I wanna take it easy. I'm planning on writing up a silly little short fic today so long as my condition doesn't take a massive drop.

    I've also got another fic I'm gonna work on once I'm feeling better, of the more adult variety :3 Anypony who's a fan of RariTwi, Twidash, Twinkie, TwiShy, TwiJack, or all of the above should look forward to it.

    And that's about it for now. Sorry for the delay in Sunset Shimmers after just ending the hiatus. It's just super hard to focus on writing when it's difficult to breath ><;; Hopefully I'll be better soon and can get the next chapter out to you before Halloween.

    Peace out y'all, don't get a chest infection. They suck.

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  • 20w, 2d
    Ace Attorney new story up!

    For all those who enjoyed the previous Ace Attorney stories I did, you may be pleased to know that there is now a thrid entry in the series :3

    Check it out here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/194870/ace-attorney-scootaloo

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  • 25w, 2d
    Changeling: Revised!

    Heyo!

    So as some of you are probably aware, I cancelled and dropped the Changeling sequal I had been working on some time last year, but I also told you that I was planning on revising the original Changeling story. Welp, the first chapter of this revision is now finished. I will be uploading the whole revised story in one go after I have finished all chapters, but for now you can find the revised first chapter here, and if you want a side-by-side comparison of the old and the new, you can find the ye olde chapter 1 here.

    Now, you're probably wondering: "What changes will you be making?" "Are you making us re-read this entire drivel just for some extra scenes?" "ALICORN AURA?! RUINED FOREVER!!!!!!!!! So hyped for S4 though."

    Well, rest assured, the story will remain unchanged as far as plot goes. The changes made will be largely grammatical and spelling fixes. It will essentially be a tidying up, fixing mistakes I left in on the first run and tweaking bits here and there so that the words flow better and make more sense. Thing is, I've grown a lot as a writer since I wrote Changeling and now I wish to use my new-found experience to make better what is one of my personal favourite fictions that I have ever written.

    Other changes you may find are:

    *Re-arranged dialogue, if I feel that the way it was structered originally is clusmy or awkwardly written. The dialogue will essenitally stay the same, though. Same meaning, same plot progession, simply styled differently.

    *Added dialogue, if I feel I didn't flesh a certain part out enough or it's simply hard to follow as it was. Again, the plot will remain the same and it won't be massive changes. An example of this is in the first chapter's revised version near the beginning. Odysseus asks Knight how he is and Knight responds that he is fine. Odysseus then passes Knight and says: "That's good. Please continue to protect my sister as you have been." I didn't feel that this scene worked well as it was.

    I felt the interaction was a little weak, so I added a line by Knight saying: "Though I am unworthy, thank you for your concern." Odysseus then responds by telling Knight that he values him as somepony who portects Aura with his life, before asking him to continue protecting her. As you can see, the plot remains unchanged, everything proceeds as it did in the original, but it fleshed out the scene a little (in my opinion), which I feel is especially important at the start of a story, when we're just meeting these characters for the first time.

    *Plothole fixes - I've skimmed over Changeling swiftly and as far as I can tell, there aren't any, but a more thorough read may reveal some, or perhaps scenes that are confusing and hard to grasp. If I find any of these, I may take steps to add a little more so that these are cleared up, but as with all changes, the plot will remain unchanged.

    *... One or two extra scenes that I was going to include as flashbacks in the sequal... OKAY, so there WILL be some extra scenes that were not in the original version (MAY! Still haven't decided for sure.) These scenes revolve around Precision Perfect. Remember how he sorta disappeared after Shining Armor went to pursue Trixie? Well, he actually went off to check up on Cadance and ran into Mystic at that time. There was also another scene in the last chapter I cut out and decided to move to the sequal where he is talking to Celestita. Both of these scenes were going to be flashbacks in the sequal as I intended to actually use Precision then, but as the sequeal is no more, I am considering adding those scenes (and ONLY those scenes. Precision won't suddenly jump into the final battle with everyone) just for completion sake. I mean, I introduced him, and I focussed at least SOME attention on him, so I figure the least I can do is show what he was up to, right?

    Anywhom, that's about it. I hope you all enjoy the revised version of this fic. Lemme know in the comments what you think of the revisions I've made so far and thank you for being such awesome peoples and enjoying this fic that I loved working on some one to two years ago :)

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  • 29w, 4d
    New chapter comin' right up!

    A new TrixDash chapter is gonna be put up today. Hold onto yer butts! It's gonna be a right doozy :3

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When Diamond Tiara is accused of stealing lunch money from Dinky Doo, she is put on trial by her class. Apple Bloom, who believes Diamond Tiara to be innocent, takes the stand to defend her.

First Published
14th Jul 2013
Last Modified
14th Jul 2013
#1 · 66w, 6d ago · 13 · 1 ·

That was a fantastic turnabout. We need more teachers like Miss Cheerilee there. These days they aren't even allowed to even mention amendment rights to students in class let alone do mock trials!

This is why you gotta facehoof at the writing staff some times on the show... Babs Seed could of lasted throughout a few more episodes in S3 and flesh her out a bit more. Allow her to stay in Ponyville for at lest one School year or something.

So much to say but all are spoilers. So I'll end it here xD

Fun story. Though it's not really a crossover as it is an adaptation. Course, alternate universe can be argued (since Babs apparently attends the CMC's School.)

In any case, a lot of characters felt very true to their canon selves. Though, how could Sweetie Belle be confused by a word when she's a dictionary? :p

#2 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh my god.  That was excellent!

Well done on combining the two.

~Skeeter The Lurker

#3 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

Well that was an unexpected twist.

#4 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh my god... without even reading it, you've made Diamond Tiara into Miles Motherfucking Edgeworth. I just know. I have to wonder who is the Larry Butz of this story. I am so fucking in. I'm just... I love you. *Glomp*

#5 · 66w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>2875956

I think Larry Buts is Babs.

Maybe Von Karma could be Babs. Instead of a whip, she spits put seeds.

#6 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2876057  I could see it... Ha, dat's what ya get ya foolishly foolish foal, foolishly foolin' around with the cutie mark crusaders! *Spits seed*

#7 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2876110

Dat's not how ah act like!

Shut up, Babs. This is a fanfic. Anything can happen.

#8 · 66w, 6d ago · 4 · ·
#9 · 66w, 6d ago · 5 · ·

OBJECTION!

The title should be "Apple Bloom: Ace Attorney"! The only time a title has that order is the Investigations series, in which the protagonist is Miles Edgeworth, a prosecutor, not a Defense Attorney!

EDIT: If it makes you feel any better about the state of humanity, I know this is a nitpick, I just wanted to OBJECTION to something

#10 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2876057>>2876110

Actually, Babs might be Godot. Instead if coffee, she eats a bag of seeds. When she's surprised, she would spit out seeds, like Godot's spit-takes.

#11 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

Already featured.

:pinkiegasp:

#12 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

HOLD IT!

It's "trial", not "trail." (Spellcheckers won't catch that since they're both legit words.)

#13 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·

Best turnabout ever!

#14 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

So this sounds exactly like the Classroom Trial from the Ace Attorney series... meaning Apple Bloom is Edgeworth, Scootaloo is the Butz, and Diamond... is Phoenix Wright. Sweetie taking the role of Gumshoe was also rather amusing.

#15 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Well done. Fits the spirit of Ace Attorney and MLP very well. I find interesting they had a confetti cannon ready, but then, I never questioned it in AA.

I could comment on any aspect, but I guess I'll say that I giggled at the class giggling at the word "penalized." I always pronounced it with a short e, but I guess it can be done with a long e as well, and subsequently be laughed at by the immature.

Oh, and of course, Princess Twilight readily available. Seems legit.

Thumbsed up, my friend. Good work.

#16 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Snails? Glitter Shell? :twilightoops: I think that my head is going to explode...

#17 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

I like that tumblr a lot. Great work, Yukito.

#18 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Congrats on making this featured!

#19 · 66w, 5d ago · · 9 ·

It's like you wanted to make a Phoenix Wright fan game, but didn't have the talent.

#20 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

That was awesome!:twilightsmile:

#21 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

yay glitter shell~~!

You have made my day, good sir. I love the Glitter Shell Tumblr and i had really loved the reference you made there. The rest was amazing as well. Great Job!:pinkiehappy:

#22 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

that was awesome!

#23 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Interesting lil ending there had me guessing the whole time. It would be a teacher always complaining about school funding. Twily should get a sign that says no housecalls.

#24 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

I've only heard of AA, and didn't get the references until the middle of the story, that's where I asked myself "Why is AB saying "Take That!" whenever she proves something?" It hit me immediately, so I felt like a fool for not seeing it earlier.:derpytongue2:

Good story. I can see how this got featured. I like to read a good, short story.

#25 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

“Objection!” Babs slammed a hoof onto her desk. “I object! That’s… objectionable!”

babs stop stealing lines from edgeworth

#26 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2878315 Or the resources? :ajbemused:

#27 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2877001 You didn't even read the description properly, did you? How can Diamond Tiara be Phoenix and Apple Bloom be Edgeworth is Diamond Tiara is the defendant and it's already stated that Apple Bloom will be defending her?

#28 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2878708 i guess he is talking about the original AA story line when they where young they had class trial and phoenix was the on being accused and edgeworth defending him

#29 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

:moustache: WOOOO Ace Attorney baby!!! And its was such a nail biter with a giant turnabout that Phoenix Wright and Apollo justice would have been proud of! I couldnt guess who was the real criminal was and that Glitter Shell shout out was great! Great job Apple Bloom! Your big sis would be proud!:applecry: (Why is this the only Apple bloom emoticon?!)

#30 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

That was epic!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp: I was in gasps the whole time.:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::heart::heart::heart::heart:

#31 · 66w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

Am I the only one who notices that the title should be "Apple Bloom: Ace Attorney" instead of "Ace Attorney - Apple Bloom"?

#32 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

i easily find this one of the best things i ever read i :heart: this story:twilightsmile:

#33 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Guess what, Apple Bloom. You end up being an attorney anyway. :pinkiecrazy:

#34 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

I hope this has a sequel, with a more serious case :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#35 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

I have to thank Turnabout Storm for getting me into the Ace Attorney series. It was a pretty amazing story to read a filly version of Phoenix Wright, especially with the huge amount of twists you managed to put in with using the "Think crazy" strategy or "flip the chess board" strategy that Apple Bloom was using.  I'm think I'm going to re-read this while listening to the Ace Attorney series.  Great work for making such a thrilling experience.

#36 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

“I court, there are no sides, my little pony.

Should that be “In court, there are no sides, my little pony.".:twilightsmile:

#37 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2875778

Skeeter, why you change your name:fluttercry::applecry:

#38 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Sequel/ part two with a different case any one?:pinkiehappy:

#39 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2879169

Proceed to my blog, the parasprite's blog and Formerly Regidar's blog for the answers you seek...

~Skeeter The Lurker

#40 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Epic.

That is all.

#41 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Very very well done :twilightsmile:

#42 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2878708>>2878727

Affirmative. The Classroom Trial was a pivotal event in PW's life, when he was accused of stealing lunch money from a classmate during PE and all the students assumed it was him except Edgeworth (only difference here being it was Edgeworth's money while here The victim was a different pony), and the teacher decided to hold a mock trial. Edgeworth defended PW and Butz provided the inaccurate testimony, but Edgey pulls it off. The clincher was the ending when it was suggested Babs and AB should switch, hinting that AB's cutie mark might be for prosecution rather than defense.

#43 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

For a sec there a thought snails was secretly a female phew crisis averted

#44 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

It felt like a real AA case, well except in this one there wasn't a murder

#45 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

This blew me away.

I stopped seeing them as fillies. They turned back into fillies only during recess and when it's all said and done. The level of professionality with Apple Bloom is what sold it.

Sweet. Thank you for the experience.

#46 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh yes, I remember the one other fic that this fic made me think of.

Kwakerjak's legel comedy that involves an adult Diamond Tiara and Flim Flam, with Applejack the princess as the judge.

#47 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

i hope you make more like this

#48 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Snails is Larry Butz, Diamond is Nick, and Apple Bloom is Edgey.

One has to wonder what will happen to turn Apple Bloom into a ruthless prosecutor seeking a "guilty" verdict above even the truth itself.

#49 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

Please, another! I loved this story.

#50 · 66w, 5d ago · · ·

I'm following that Glittershell Tumblr and couldn't help but feel rather pleased at the hint to it. Besides that, this was a fantastic read and very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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