Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )
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A typical cliché Trixie and Twilight story, where Trixie shows up at Twilight's library one day, asking for help. Only with a little twist.
Sorry that this delayed the Twixie series somewhat. I just really wanted to write a story involving filly Trixie and Twilight so much :3
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A filly Trixie? Sounds interesting
"there was only pony in the world" <-- you forgot to add one. If i find anymore mistakes I'll let you know.
If I'm not too lazy to post all the mistakes.
Well I read it, I like the idea of the story, there are a lot of typos though. And Trixie speaking with the w's is a bit strange.
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I did the math and this story is roughly eqiavalent to 28 pages of Brisngr or the seventh Harry Potter book.
It is a wonderful story though, and deserves the like you gave it.
This was defiantly an interesting story.
aww...
cute!
and now, a filly parade!
It was good but so many words hurt my head...
Oh god, the cuteness, there is no end to it!
"Twilight was cut off by a loud “damnit!” from Trixie, causing everypony nearby to momentarily turn to face the filly.
“Trixie, language!” Twilight shouted, almost on instinct.
“Twixie’s not a child! And you’re not her mommy!” Trixie shouted back, still fumbling with the cube."
"Trixie nodded, and started giggling to herself. “You have some strange books under your bed, Twilight,” she said, causing the librarian’s eyes to widen as she blushed. Trixie started dancing on the spot, chanting “Twilight’s a pervert!” in a sing-song voice over and over.
With the exception of Fluttershy, the rest of the group were trying their best not to laugh. In the end, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie couldn’t hold it in any longer, and exploded with laughter, soon joined by Trixie. Rarity managed to escape by saying that she would fetch the sapphires from her store, and Spike joined her."
Awesome story! I lol'd several times, and that's not something that happens very often.
D'aw, Twixie is so cute! So is Twilight!
>>Frizzy
Yes they are.
I shall read... when it's not 1 AM here and I am exhausted beyond all reason.
That was awesome :D
Filly Trixie is best Tricie! Adorable story, I really liked the candy shop scene
This had so many D'aww moments I think i got Diabetes. This is weapons grade cute.
No wonder Rarity was having problems! Somepony must have pulled all the stickers off and stuck them back on the wrong way.
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Somehow that never occurred to me when I read it, but you are indeed right. That cube is unsolvable in its current state :D
And back, and d'awwing. And wanting her-no, needing her to come back!
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How do you correctly spell and misspell Trixie in the same sentence?
957737 easily
I didn't see that. Well, that's what happens when you try to review through an iphone. Damn auto correct pulls off the strangest things...
omg this is table flippin awesome it should be featured
Adorable and hilarious.
I can barely handle the D'AWWWWW!!!
Nice. I got a laugh out of it.
tl:dr
THIS WAS AWESOME!
seriously , thank you for writing this!!!
... I tried to keep track of the daww, but I forgot to count after my heart popped.
Why did they make Twixie turn back? So they wouldn't have to take care of her?
Lovely & funny story ! I love Twixie
Man, at first I didn't realize what all you were referring to when you brought in th 3 time traveling ponies, but I laughed so hard when I did. Excellent references to the past, hilarious
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Cute and silly fun, It felt a bit rushed in spots, namely Trixie's confession and the lisp got a bit annoying after a while but nothing that really bothered me too much.
Absolutely adorable! Loved everything about it.
Definitely sexual tension between Twilight and Trixie.
I forgot about this story. It's extremely enjoyable. Have you ever thought of writing an Alternate ending where she doesn't change back?
Excellent story! I absolutely loved how fiwwy Twixie spoke. Definitely a new favorite.
The only thing I noticed about it was that a couple of times you said defiantly instead of definitely, I wouldn't normally say anything, particularly on something this old, but I see a ton of people accidentally do that for some reason, it is a bit of a pet peeve of mine.
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It's because when someone misspells definitely, Word likes to auto-correct to defiantly >< And when there's no red sqwiggly line, people just don't notice the error.
This was excellent. Perfect balance of adorableness, comedy and feels. Absolutely loved this.
HHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNnnnnnnnngggggg
This is:
This is high-caliber friendshipping. I approve.
"Trixie secretly wants friends" seems to be a common idea. Wonder if that'll be touched on in S4.
I love it. So much AWWWWW.
That needs to be "definitely".
Here, too.
THIS FAN FICTION BROKE THE INVERTED SHADOW!!!!
The only thing I didn't like was the Doctor Who part (and I skipped it entirely, to be honest)
teehee
trixie's LITTLE problem
i finally geddit!!!!
so cute!
D'aww, that was cute.
I expected shipping, despite the taggings.
Bath scene was too schmaltzy and preachy. Otherwise, a good, fun-filled story.
Wow, how can one be that stubborn? Oh well, at least it was fun.
Was I the only one that imagined William Hartnell (The First Doctor) voice in the Doctor Whooves scene there?
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That's good, since that was the version of the Doctor I was portraying :3