• Member Since 9th Sep, 2015
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TheOnionKnight69


The one, the only, Orion...Brony extraordinare! Writer of casual, clop, and anything requested.

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From town to town, Steve has been known for being a real crowd pleaser. He has thrilled mares and colts all across Equestria! The fun soon comes to an end as he must make a gripping decision, either to continue his career as a Party Entertainer Extraordinaire, or move into a much more elusive performing job. The bills need to get paid somehow, and the bits are just one buck away...Does his shop in Ponyville bring him money and joy, or will the moral repercussions leave Steve mad with guilt? A shop intended only for mares, and only for legal ones at that... That is, until a fateful day The Cutie Mark Crusaders show up.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

There's definitely a good story somewhere in that description, but i feel it's just a tad off. Hard to put my finger on it. But i give you props for an idea that caught my eye.

6437159 Work in progress my friend, the info is like the pilot episode and alas the finished product is off slightly :fluttershbad:

Stick around for the ride, or don't; this Boulder of a story has to pick up speed...

Hehe I got what I was interested in; the story plays out like a drama TV Show; reminds me of breaking bad but instead of a slow transition of meth and chaos, it's bucking :pinkiecrazy:

Kudos for the story OnionKnight

6437934 Heh, I don't know, as a fan of MLP for five seasons, I beg to differ :trollestia:

This has caught my attention

6438036 I wanna see her as Saul Goodman, haha! But you have some well placed and timed pictures my friend. :pinkiehappy:

Very... interesting. Lol, seriously, this was a bit weird to read, but i enjoyed the plot :P

6448085 Haha, you're too generous; gimme some of dat constructive criticism! It's rushed, plot is weird, and story somewhat plays out over time...that's what I know so far :pinkiesmile:

6448118 Lol :P Well, i really have no particular complaints about this story. It's just.. interesting xDD

So where does the madness end? :trixieshiftright:

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