Aurora Steel
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- Member Since 30th Jan, 2014
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Aurora Steel
I draw stuff and write stuff, nuff said
Aurora Steel
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This is interesting! Just one thing, you called RD's house a manner but I think it's supposed to be called a manor. Besides that I can't wait to read more!
Grammar and pacing. You need them.
There is a thing called a 'period', also referred to as a 'full stop'. There is also the 'comma'.
USE THEM.
I'll give you some advice.
Some of the names need to have their first letters capitalized. Slow down.
Try finding a proofreader. There are groups for that.
4221506 sorry but its the auto correct
thanks for the comment
4221648 sorry
I'm trying but this is my first story
but thanks for the comment
4221835 thanks
i'm trying 
4221879 no problem
You use auto correct and "this is my first story" as excuses.
That's worth a downvote in and of itself.
Also, this is not Spitfire. Spitfire would be okay with seeing Rainbow with Soarin if that's what made them both happy.
4222924 Sorry I just like to be nice but I will try adding the positives and the negatives of the story to a comment.
4222664 well I'm sorry if you don't like this story
Thanks for the comments guys.
I just don't know if I want to continue on this story now
4224538 I understand if you might not want to finish the story but if it is because of some negative comments don't give up. Try and take on board the constructive criticism. The more you write and practice the more improvement people will start to see. You don't have to continue if you don't want to but this is just some advice.
4224686 thanks for the advice and the reason is kind of because of the criticism
and thanks for the support
I've fixed the story spacing and so on
I loved the part at the end when she fell off the bed
lol anyways awesome story I can't wait for the next chapter and I love how you did Soarin's character 
keep up the good work
Why are you getting such negative comments, I'm concerned?
I have noticed that there are some errors in one of the paragraphs. Do you need an editor? I can help you, I'm a bit of an expert on MLP FIM. I can help you with your story if you want.
4230153 yes please I would love your help
4230180 okay
4230180 I like your story.  Why does it have down votes?
4243073 thanks AceCombat101fan
I don't know why but I'm working on chapter 3 so maybe I can change their minds
Anyway thanks for reading my story
4243526 No problem, hey I know two editors who could help you. They are Silver Blade and eggynack, they help me with my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings when it was getting down votes, but now the up votes are coming. Want to check out my story?
4243926 sure, I'll check out your story
sango_4000 said that he would help me on my story so thanks for the suggestion
I can't to see the next chapter whenever.
I didn't not mean to put whenever sorry so sorry.
I don't make any sense do I?
4281651 not really but I figured out what you meant
I don't know why people don't like this story some people are rude. I think I spelled that right.
4288854 you spelled it right!
I don't know why though
Can't wait for the next chapter you did a great job on this chapter.
4311006 thanks
Sorry it took so long I didn't really know what to do for this chapter until like 2 hours ago
But thanks
Your welcome.
This story is really good, but you need to work on grammar! You can go to some groups for helping authors and ask someone to proofread. I'm pretty sure someone will help. If you do that, I think this story will get much more likes. It's nice to see you haven't given up, even though you have many dislikes.
Update soon!
4321327 yeah I'm trying and I'm still getting used to fimfiction
but I am gonna ask Sango_4000 if he can proof read so...yeah 
Thanks
4321789
Well, that's great! I wish you good luck!
4321942 thank you
Nice twist in this chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
4343664 thanks
and I think the next chapter will either be out later this week or next week
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter.
4349587 thank you
At the beginning of chapter 4
When Soarin, Fleetfoot and Misty Fly got to the medical wing, Rainbow Dash was nowhere to be seen
Can you please fix that, I can't really tell how you were writing the beginning. You won't mind if I proofread it? I mean you can say no and all. As a reminder, add a comma in the sentence you wrote. And please fix that little error.
4359962 yeah i will fix it
you can proof read if you want i don't mind
I liked how Soarin was changing when he got mad. Great chapter
4371339 thanks i thought that it would be something different
next chapter will come out soon!
yay!... more down votes!...
This had some good action and since you've said you're gonna get a proofreader I won't bother to suggest you getting one. The pacing might need work though, it seems quite fast. Soarin and Dash are cute together nonetheless. Nice job on making this chapter longer. Looking forwards to more!
Oh my goodness finally I got around to finishing this, ugh busy, busy, busy.....anyways great chapter I really enjoyed it keep up the fabulous job!!