when Rainbow starts to worry if she'll ever find a special somepony, some stallion she's known for quite some time becomes something more than a friend.
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Lightning Splash
Hi everypony, I'm a young pegasister who likes to read and write mlp fanfics, also I am very careful with what I favorite. I hope you like my stories and I would appreciate if you would follow me.
Lightning Splash
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I can definitely see Applejack doing something like that.
XD
All in all, not a bad start! :D
Thank you. I definitely think chapter four is the best, but I hope i can do better
Needs work. Grammar, spelling, word choice, capitalization, spacing a few times, and a few other things. But otherwise a fine story.
oh yeah, i can tell. If i wrote it with Microsoft Word it would be better.
(Corey)
i'll probably edit it a lot
Don't let dislikes throw you off. Just keep at it and you'll find that your writing (as well as popularity) will greatly improve :D Also there are groups with editors who can help you out if you ever want to boost you story's quality :D
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but i was wondering how do other people edit your story (to make it better of course.)
Thank you
4600702 Usually once you find an editor they'll send you a personal message regarding all of the mistakes that they found, it's up to you to fix them... But they can at least point out all of the mistakes and tell you how to fix them :D
This looks like an Alright story. I will be waiting for future updates,to see if it goes into my favorite pile. Good job with this part of a meddling Applejack.
You wrote this chapter from a mobile?! Impressive.
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Thanks. I'm glad someone appreciates how hard that is. It's also kind of you to say it's impressive, cause I know there's lots of more impressive work out there on FIMfiction.
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Thanks to you too.
I hope you like the exsisting story and the more to come.
soarin and dash got married right?
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Yup, at the bottom there's some authors notes that explain somethings
Don't get me wrong, I liked this story, but it was... a tad short. Any particular reason why?
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also it was my first story
I think when I edit it I'll make it longer. I wanted this to be long at first but I figured in the end it was going to be a short story and I felt it wasn't my best so i tried to end it. There will be lots of editing and adding extra chapters
BRA-F*CKING-VO!!!
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Excuse me?
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ok hears the thing its a good story but you might want to make it a little longer it was to short for my tast if i where to re-wright it i would ae it so much longer i have so many thoughts of what could have happend and no ofence probably wright it better then you did
4773679 This was my first story and not my best. I think I'll leave it alone for now, I'm swamped with editing and writing and drawing!
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ok
Great story so fae, however trenderhoof was ever so creepy. I doubt Applejack would ever fall for him. But it's your story, not mine.
ich hab tränen in den Augen weil es so süß ist
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