I am a huge Ponies and FanFic fan but i dont always have much time but i write when i can and im always looking for someone to do cover art for my stories if anyone's interested
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Soarin has been in love with a certain rainbow maned mare for some time now. But how far will he go to cement there relationship and win her heart........this doesnt seem like its going to go well.
(the image is not mine, i dont know who it belongs too but if the artist wishes then i will take it down)
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It 'twas finally posted, congrats bro!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'd review it, but seeing as the second chapter would contain more things, I shall wait and see.
5144757 well good to know ponies are at least seeing it,
what do you think of the first chapter? 
I like it.
5144900 thanks, always good to hear positive feed back
5144882 it was a good start, despiste the errors that occasionally popped up.
5144909 i am really bad about that, i actually have multiple editors to try and catch that stuff but a most of them are either grounded because their grades or are on vaction so i only have one right now but he did a great job
This is cool just make your princess sound awesome
Seems like an interesting story.Good luck with future chapters.
5145065 what do you mean make my princess sound awesome??
5147647 I'm Rainbow Dash and i now am a princess
5148575 oh ok, I will, and what do you think, did I get her attitude right?
5149332 Yes you did just make sure Soarin doesn't get any ideas
5151375 I will
glad to know you like it
5152032 I like everything except slow ponies
5152032 I like everything except slow ponies
5154263 I know how that is, but there are a few slow ponies that you like
5155290 Yes I like Flutters and Soarin, plus Twilight and Rarity
5155558 soarins not that bad, besides hes a style flier that prefers tricks to speed....plus you cant denie it, you think hes cute
5155755 Yes I do and wait how did you know that
Good chapter. A few errors here and there, but looks interesting nonetheless. I'll definitely be following this story to see how it goes.
Nice intro, you just switched verb tenses a couple of times throughout the chapter.
Upvote from me
I love it
5156528 just a hunch
plus i can just tell
5157046 good to know you like it. and thanks for the thumbs up
5156610 glad to know you enjoyed it, and thanks for the follow
5158156 happy to hear it, i try my best
5156610 and if your interested i post blogs to let people know about updates and when to expect new chapters often so follow if you really want to have good access and to have info sooner
Nice job with this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Good luck. It's going to be fun watching them train.
5197509 thanks glad to know you like it
Damn it Soarin. You should know that first dates should be done somewhere romantic.
5197632 but its not always that easy, especially wit a guy like soarin
Some grammar issues, otherwise it's good. I'll leave a pointer here;
Alright, what can we do to improve this..... Hmm.... Aha!
And then.....
What next... Oh!
Let's end the other part and make it two sentences, Eh?
So... we got those fixed... what next... Y'know what, I think that's good. Now just add some commas!
There we go, much better!
Now of course, these are all minor, but they all make it easier for the reader. If you ever need help, just ask me.
Otherwise, I'm enjoying it. Keep it up!
5236436 thanks man, would you be willing to help edit my next chapter that comes out, i cant pay or anything but would really appreciate it
5236512 Of course! I'd be happy to.
Look at my page for info about how to contact me though.
5236525 ok will do...i'll contact you when i get the next ne done
personally I think that rainbow and Soarin are the best couple.
I love your story it's very good.
Keep up the good work and if you finish the next chapter i'll probably follow you and add this story to my favs.
5285398 thanks, good to know you like it
i am working on the next chapter right now so hopfully by the end of the day i can have it finished and by tomorrow i can get it posted
you're welcome and i'll check tomorrow and the next chapter have a nice day
good chapter!
loved the story so far!
5290949 thanks for the positive feed back
That was funny. I do feel sorry for Soarin. Denied. Great job. Even if this was a bit rushed, I was laughing all the way.
5290952 Amazing story, do take your time though, a lot could come from this if you don't rush it, thumbs up from me, also, i can edit stories/chapters if you need.
5291257 maybe but im probably going to stick with my current editors. but thanks for the positive feed back
Oh dear...
You forgot to remove some'of the editor notes...
Comma.
I, I'm and I'd 101.
Y... y-you included my side note.... xD
5293943 actually forgot about the side note too, i was just so tired at the time cause i dont get much sleep that i guess i missed it
5293953 Gave me a good laugh xD
Just fix at and sleep then. ^^
5293963 nope no sleep for me, i get to bed at midnight sometimes later and get up at around six thirty, i dont get any naps in between except on weekends so im tired a lot but i have to deal with it i guess, its not all bad
5293975 Tis is midnight here, And I'm going to bed. I get up at 6:00 or so, but I have a calm day.
...
Yea, math tests and long classes is a calm day.