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L0rd0f7hund3r


I'm a quasi-professional internet technologies specialist who dabbles in fanfiction. I write, draw, and sometimes edit. When I'm not creating, I'm sleeping. Mornings are my mortal enemy.

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"I'm not sure, Fluttershy. Everything about his appearance is a mystery. Rainbow Dash was the first to see him and she was certain he was dead. Nopony I know can take such punishment and live."
"Well, what if- he's not…"
"'Not' what?"
"What if's he's- not… a pony…"
The purple thing twisted her slightly. If I didn't know better, I would swear she was confused.
"Not a- pony? But how could that be? Nothing like him exists in the fossil record. The only thing I can think of that ever REMOTELY comes close to his description is-"

....that's a pretty big damn idiot ball you're handing them. They've seen him, they've healed him, of course they know he's not a fucking pony.
Not to mention, how the hell is something not being a pony that big of a deal?
Griffons exist.
Diamond Dogs exist.
Dragons exist.
The precedent for non-pony lifeforms has been established.

4101787 I see where you;'re going with this. In the next chapter, I hope to show why they couldn't tell what he was.

I'm pretty this pregnant pause is cause of concern. Even without 20/20 vision, I can just make the dawning horror in the thing called Twilight Sparkles eyes.

"A Human…"

Please don't say humans are evil, please don't say humans are evil, please don't say humans are evil. . . .

4101911 No, but they aren't really well liked. They also aren't well remembered. Twilight is having some trouble locating books on humans…

It's HIE, it starts relatively benign, and there will be blood and sex and profanity. Please be nice; I'm experimenting here.

You should probably up the rating to mature and gore, then. I'm hoping this won't just turn out to be another rape fic, it shows some promise thus far.

4106470 I might do that later, although for now, all the gore I'm going to write is done. As for the rape fic, NOT HAPPENING. Any clopping here will be purely consensual.

4108769
Good to know, although the "dark" tag still worries me a bit.

4109653 :rainbowlaugh: I think that, once you get to know Steve, you'll know why I added the dark tag. Nothing sinister, just, he's no saint.

4109666
Well, the "Dark" tag is for stories that commonly feature sinister things like... murder, rape, torture, mutilation, etc., not merely "crudeness". You might want to remove that tag if this story wasn't planned to focus on darker topics like those.

4109731 Oh, there's gonna be a killing or two… :trixieshiftleft:

4109736
Is that the focus of the story, though? Is it common enough to make the story "dark" in overall tone?

4106470 hey nothing wrong with rape fics : (

4114711 I have a problem with rape in general and specifically. So, NO RAPE.

When's the newest chapter coming out.

4109731 couldn't agree with you more

4116033 Later today. I want to get through dome of my favorites first.

wai teh hate?

:rainbowlaugh: that is all...


F*cking Twilight :facehoof:

4128330 I dunno why, I feel a "Goodfellows" reenactment coming on…

4128332
I must be missing something, cause I have no clue what you mean...:twilightblush:

4128364 The laughing RD icon… I got me thinking of Joe Pesci's "Am I funny to you?" monologue.

:rainbowderp: Two in one day?
You are the best!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

4128833 Well, I left a few questions that needed answers in the last chapter. Hopefully, I filled some plot holes. Uh, no pun intended. :twilightsheepish:

4128851 :twilightblush: I can't imagine what would happen when the CMC make an appearance… Oh, wait, I can! :trollestia:

My opinion is that he was asleep in the last part.
After all he DID just get a three hours Twlight Lecture...
Or he got poisoned by the apple brown betties.

If Stevie is lucky, the previously known humans were some of Johanathan Swift's Yahoos, animals in human form. If not...I really hope its not magic poisoning making Rage-virus zombies... :twilightoops:

4138227 No, but if you read this next chapter coming up, you might see something- interesting forming.

4138265 I'll get to that. First, I must unveil the plot. (God, that is so suggestive…)

While I do love Rainbow Dash, I can deal with a little... bashing. Just please don't do it just to be a dick :rainbowkiss:

See what I did there?

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