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Duelist96
Retired writer of almost anything. Lover of RariDash and background ponies.
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Love it!!
I'm gonna shout this out! 
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Go for it.
Little bit of plagiarism from 'Where I belong' by Silentpegasus.
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Yeah I know about that part but it was mainly for the beginning as the chapters go on though it becomes its own thing.
eh the herem part im scared for because i dont know what might happen. might want to suggest some things in the future. oh btw moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please soon
is twilight unicorn or alicorn in your story. doesnt matter just askin
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She's a unicorn.
Ooooo! a badass military guy who got betrayed by his own country and is filled to the brim with hatred? AWESOME!!!!
you know after reading so many clop fictions, i wouldn't mind if you took this story super slow and possibly add clop waaaaay down the road. i mean the guy is some super soldier and he isn;t just going to rut a poniy anytime soon.
twilight
awesome story. keep in mind he's a badass super soldier and make his character correspond to that as well.
(“I will not let you consume me foul beast. You can taunt me and even threaten me but you will never be able to get me to agree to your terms. I will live happily here with my new friends and I will be able to keep everyone safe from what I used to be. I can change no matter what it takes and no matter how long it takes. You will be nothing and always that so you are just better off leaving me alone and never bothering me again.”)
his character is a little off here buddy. remember, he's a soldier, not your typical citizen.
Rarity!
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I will say yes that he is out of character. But I will also mention that it is also for the giant drop that will happen to get him to snap. Although I will not say what will cause that to happen.
Got halfway then decided its not worth my time
lyre and like i said add spitfire and lightning dust. but seriously lyra first then octavia then viynl then trixie then the others
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I looked over my notes and saw that I can add Spitfire and Lightning Dust. Now just comes the fun part when the show up.
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awesome but i have an idea. how about he meets them when he saving their lives. idk what from but i am sure you can figure it out also when is the next chapter going to be out.
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Halfway finished with it so hopefully tomorrow.
3369657 yahoo
seems like a very good story so far keep up the good work
This fic and the fic somewhere I belong are exactly the same but I'm too lazy to see which came out first
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I will say that somewhere I belong came out first and I am trying insanely hard to make it different.
3375088 well its not working lol but either way good fic anyway it seems to be going slightly (very slightly) different but not by much. Also you might want to read the scent: lust if mares it is also close to yours
3375088 and sorry if that comment was worded horribly but I'm REALLY tired
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Nah its all good and another funny thing is I read the scent: lust for mares and now I am going to re-think chapter 3 before that even gets published but either way that is feedback that I like to receive.
3375339 no problem
Forget Sweetie belle x spike.
how about. sweetie belle x feather weight.
And for spike, it could be spike x garble.
I seriously cannot wait for next update
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nice work dude.
keep it up.
another chapter? my reaction: Awesome!!!
You mean two to one?
Eh, this isn't my kind of story. I'm a major fan of military in Equestria, but this story seems to run headfirst into clichés instead of using clichés to further the story. For example, Princess Celestia is just going to trust the word of a creature she has never met? I understand that she has confidence in the Mane Six, the EoH, and that she has made some interesting leadership decisions, but that's really stretching it.
*sigh of satisfaction* This story is wonderful...Not much else to say about it...
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Thank you. That support allows me to continue even if some people don't like it.
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Do what you feel is right
just doin my part to help
so can i expect the next ones to come out soon
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yes.
3383880 how soon
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3 to 4 hours then maybe a second one.
3384161 how long will they be and which ones will they be
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the one coming out is about 3,500 words and is pinkie's party.
the second if out tonight will be 4,000 words and will have to do with James visiting the everfree for the yearly visit and the other little secret that only you and I know right now.
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Need any OCs?
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Probably for a short story that I have planned.
3385666 my OCs are spec ops. feel free to look through my blog and choose
major nosebleed should have happened the minute he entered and his face got really red