• Published 5th Feb 2014
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It's too Cheesy! - graceyadorable



Cheese Sandwich is a quiet and shy pony from Manehatten. He has strong child ambition to become somepony great. But he is to shy and scared to admit any of it. He later finds out how he can get every pony to know his name!

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Leaving it behind

He stood at the edge of a manehatten. The town was busy as normal. Even though its three in the morning. Cheese had had a rough time sleeping that night and new that he just had to leave. If he didn't take the chance, he would dismiss it. Newbery had given him a map of Equestria to use as a guide when he decided to leave. She took forever to finally give it to him. She was so focused on mixing a potion to make oranizing the library better organized. She could get caught up so quickly with anything. It always could take her forever to talk to you when she is busy doing practically anything! He wished Newbery and Lipton could have came with him but they had there own lives that they had to live. This is his chance. He had doubts about this but today is better than never. He set one hoof on the border. The sign said 'you are now leaving manehatten.' He pranced towards Celestia's sun towards the new horizon.

As happiness fell to critical levels, his Cheesy Sense began to pull him in a dozen different directions at once. Fillydelphia, Canterlot, Vanhoover: happiness was tanking in all of them, one after another. Manehattan went, and he worried about his friends. In Bayroan nothing interesting was found. He felt Appleloosa go from his vision. He barely had time to think, before Las Pegasus started to pull at him too. It got to the point where he was literally chasing his own tail.
After that, something went hideously wrong. He felt as though his insides were being sucked out, along with all his earth pony magic. He crawled behind a rock, threw up, and huddled there, hiding from whatever it was that could negate all the happiness in the world.

Comments ( 4 )

And so begins Cheese's quest to Ponyville, and the party that would change his life.

Comment posted by ObabScribbler deleted Feb 10th, 2014
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