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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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This story is a sequel to A Pie Without Filling


Set two months after the events of A Pie Without Filling, reading that story first is advised. :twilightsmile:

Cheese lets his thoughts wander as he strolls around town. Only to find that a solution might be right under his nose.

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Comments ( 16 )

You have a way to make the waterworks flow. This time in a good way.

Will check out later

This was sad... :fluttercry:

but at least the ending was happy :pinkiehappy: Assuming Scoots accepts, that is (not that I think she would).

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Why don't you think she would? :trixieshiftright:

I feel like this should get two sequels:
One where she accepts, and one where she politely declines the offer, but they end up adopting another filly instead.
The reason I think she might refuse is because she'd prefer to be adopted by RD, and she might find Pinkie a bit too wild for her tastes.

8117806 Well, I mean, she's usually associated with Rainbow Dash is all...

Read the story and...
cdn.meme.am/instances/71171760.jpg neff said. Here's a like:scootangel: keep up the good work

I have only one "complaint"-This seems like a E rating but maybe I just didn't read it right. (Or maybe I'm just being dumb)

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Hmm... I suppose you might be right. I just clicked "T" out of habit. :twilightsmile:

D'AWWWW, THREEQUEL! Please :pinkiehappy:

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SUMMER! :pinkiehappy:
In time, maybe... :raritywink:

It works! Now we need another sequel with Scootaloo's answer, and beyond, :scootangel: then you will have yourself a Trilogy! Who would of thought? :rainbowlaugh:

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Technically, the story doesn't end here. It's not exactly center stage, but the story does continue in one of my more recent works. :trixieshiftright:
Thank you for all the feedback, by the way, and for the follow! I'm thrilled you're enjoying my work. :twilightsmile:

Awwwww. What a sweet follow up.

The sad tag had me rather worried there. I'm glad that this turned out so sweet.

Dawww I wish there was a sequel but dawww

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