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This story is a sequel to Friendly Fire
She has waited.
She has waited for years, and now the unlikely individual that captured her affection has returned, but not in the way she had expected. Now, she finds herself in love with a King. Surely, there will be something to separate them again, with his new position...
... won't there be?
(Despite the unfortunate post date, this is a genuine work)
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Good, i was expecting a sequel
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I hope I didn't disappoint!
Is there really a point to saying this when it says that this story was made on April second?
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Mayhaps because the date is still April 1st for the author.
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Like Hash said, over here it still says April 1st.
Oh sweet Celestia, why didn't I see this earlier? I'll check it out later.
[Royal eyebrow-waggling intensifies]
Don't worry about the date post too much. People will judge by their own eyes when they actually read. On another note I am interested in seeing where this goes so tracking this.
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Probably my favourite side of Celestia to write for.
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True.
And Part 2 should be out relatively quick, unless life happens.
8067717 Trust me Life is one of the valid reasons for things getting in the way. Even I have trouble keeping up with both interest and time. Even I'm working on my story as I type this out. I even finished the second story I post elsewhere today. It took a long time to get through that in one piece.
that cliffhanger though... well done. i'll be back.
Haha I loved this! I liked seeing you write the calm and comfortable side of Celestia! And also Thorax. I like Thorax too.
XD
Here a few things I think need improving on.
There should be an 'all' between 'those years'.
'was said' should be removed.
“hip-hip-hooray”s. Should be '“hip-hip-hooray's."'
I think you missed a sentence before this one. Shouldn't Fleur's calling to him before this sentence be here. Or was
what she said?
I feel like that there should be a sentence of Fleur giving Fancy a look between these two paragraphs.
I don’t think those three dots are necessary there because the sentence before that one had it.
There should be a question mark at the end of that sentence.
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Indeed,
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What can I say? I like cliffhangers.
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Hi, Spec! How've you been?
Also, thanks! It's a fun side to write for.
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Actually, there was supposed to be a 'few' there.
Noted.
She was the one calling that out.
I had a similar idea, but whenever I included it, it felt awkward or misplaced. It seemed better to just imply it.
I'll correct that, sure.
Actually, the second part of that line is more of a statement than a question.
And also, for future reference: there's and 'Edit' button on the top right corner of comments you've left. I recommend you use that instead of deleting past comments, please.
8068442 I wanted to put everything I said in one big comment. That's why I deleted the previous ones.
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Ah, I see.
8067717 How quick do you think?
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If all goes according to plan, then within the next couple of weeks.
8069047 How many parts do you think it will be? 2 or 3?
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Just 2,
I shall be looking forward to the rest of this story indeed.
Good to see this
And may God go with you, too
I won't be surprised if that was Prince Blueblood.
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I was hoping someone would notice that.
Bonus chapter?! YES! MOAR!!!!!!!!!!
good stuff
This is me right now:
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Glad you enjoyed it.
You misspelled dinner table.
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Diner, as in restaurant.
So there's going to be more at some point? That's fine. I can wait. (Not really, I can hardly wait!)
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... maybe...
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I was hoping those jokes would work.
I'm curious now, we need closure.
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As long as you're not expecting clop, the answer will come in time.
8080586 Maybe? Please don't troll with me like that.
'the' is not necessary there.
It would've been awesome to see this as a long story. It would definitely be sweet.
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Don't worry, a much longer sequel is in planning.
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This is a great example of a well put together story, and for that, I applaud you, good Sir!
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Thank you!
Is that Shining Armor?
And what exactly is the Trump reference?